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probs the second saddest scene in that book, other than Hollyleaf :[this is so old and bad pls look at this instead:
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To be honest, this is pretty amazing, the kittens are adorable and Ferncloud looks exactly how I would imagine her, the only thing is, she does look a bit like she is floating and her eyes don't really have enough depth. Brightheart looks amazing, I love the shading and her patches look amazing, she is exactly how I would imagine her, the lost-side of her face looks amazing, though it is only a small portion of the picture, you can tell right away, even though you haven't read the book, that it is Brightheart. The kits, now they aren't supposed to look like that but they are really adorable and the tiny paws on Brightheart's tail are just so cute.
I hope this sounds alright ^^
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haha thanks, but I really don't like this one anymore
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I have so much to say about this picture.
For one, Ferncloud's design is simply beautiful. I can really see why Dustpelt loves her. She's amazing and exactly how I imagined her.
Second, The texture effects and shading were remarkable. Unfortunately, there was little or no shading around Ferncloud's body. A simple mistake, it seems, but it doesn't give it much depth - she appears to be floating, almost.
I love the way you did the blood, although I doubt it would come out of her eyes like that. Although, it did well to add a creepy effect. I also love the look of one kit looking worried and the other reassuring him/her. And the way Brightheart is trying to keep them safe and innocent, though preferring not to look herself.
So, this is just what I thought of it; there are other things, too, though too much to sum up in just one critique! ^.^
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Very beautiful..Fernclouds design is like,amazing!! Blood looks so cool! The backround is so good!I like how you blended the ground.The nursery looks so cool!The moss bedding looks so cool!Brightheart's eye is so detailed!I love the kits design,but to me it looks like Heathertail and Lionblaze XD Although her death scene had all her kits and Dustpelt with her.It still went well though!
I think Fernclouds eyes should be closed,but good enough.The expressions really give meaning,Derncloud is light/pale gray though.The shading is so amazing and the blood on her paws is so nice!!over all is
AMAZING COOL DETAILED AND AWESOME AND EPIC AND AWESOEME.
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wow my first crituque. Okay. So the blood was very good very realistic and also it combines sad, scary, and adorable and the same time. I also love how you imagined lostface and ferncloud and the kits are adorable!!!!! I love how the kits are just so clueless!!! The shadows are so realistic! im so sorry but i have to ue up the rest of my 34 words m m m m m m m m mm m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m m mm m m m m m m
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Wow i really thought this part was sad this was amaing i thought you did really well drawing by the way i don't think blood would come from her eye's but if she was scratched there it makes since and the only reason originalty is low is becuz erin made the moment but i think i'll give you 5 just because you deserve it
though i think you should have put the nae of who's talking because at first i thought it was the kits i really don't know though i LOVE how you made brightheart the burn looks better than most i've seen and trust me I'VE SEEN ALOT OF EM and with her frown if i didn't know anybetter i'd think it was a screen shot (except for the words)
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D'aww, that was so sad. TT_TT Ferncloud has always been such a caring and gentle cat, she didn't deserve such a cruel death...Well, I guess none of the cats who died in that book deserved it...
You did a really good job on it, the picture looks fantastic and you captured this heart-wrenching scene really well. Especially the expressions of Brightheart and Ferncloud are fantastic. Brightheart looks so sorrowful and helpless, and Ferncloud somehow suprised as if she didn't see this coming.
I love the colouring, too, it does not seem too overloaded and is perfectly fine. Especially the blood looks very realistic and the anatomy is perfect (speaking for myself, I think it's pretty difficult to draw animals with the correct anatomy).
So, it's a really sad picture, but also totally awesome! I've to say I really envy your drawing skills, I wish I would be so talented...
Amazing picture, you have a new watcher!
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Thanks for the awesome critique!
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OH man this was a emotionally ripping part of the book for me and I knew someone would make it into an art work soon.
Well first off the detail is awesome on both she-cats fur. Ferncloud looks like I pictured her! The only thing I can complain about with her is the eyes look a little to bulgy and don't have enough depth to them. Another thing is the small dark brown kitten has an odd looking muzzle to where I can't see his nose. Other then those two things I really love it Keep up the great work!!
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I have not yet read the book, yet I have heard that Ferncloud had died. From the description of the scene, it seems that you have really hit it spot on, including the placement of the characters. The character designs are exact for all the cats, including the two kits that were not described very well in the book. I love the fur texture and shading in this picture, it really makes it look real. The blood, although scary, is very realistic, and is also shaded well. I also think the anatomy of the cats are perfect, although the brown kit's head is a bit.. awkward. Other than that, I think that you did a wonderful job with this picture! c:
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I think this is a wonderful Picture, im sorry but I have to ask, who's kittens are those with Brightheart? because I know she only had one and her name was Whitepaw, I haven't read the books in a while (and i dont know whitepaw's warrior name so sorry).
Back to the picture. I love how you did Ferncloud and Brightheart, very nice, I like how you think her to look, even if i think it is unlikely she would have any type of tabby markings.
the kittens I like how you did them, Im guessing the one that asked the question is the one that looks confused looking at ferncloud while the other is looking at the one who asked the question and answers.... any way im over 100 words so Ima post this now... then maybe try to sleep so peace out Bro.
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I didnt read the book myself but I did hear that this scene was one of the saddest-and I think you portrayed that very well.
Cons: The thing that stands out to me the most is the kits' expressions. The orange tabby seems to be staring off into nothing, which doesnt exactly make much sense. I would think it's expression would be a bit more questioning and confused. The next thing I notice is Ferncloud's nose. I think the lineart could have been a little less chunky and the nose less of a flat triangle. The only other complaint I have is the blood. Since the blood is pouring out of her neck the bottom of Ferncloud's left leg should be more or less matted with blood as well.
Pros: Brightheart's expression is fantastic,you can tell what she's feeling just by the simple expression you drew on her. Also, Ferncloud's anatomy is very well done. I especially likehow you did her backleg and tail. The shading is very simple yet effective, I like how you didnt over-shade the whole thing. The textures are very well done as well.
Overall this is an exeptionally well done piece with easy to fix flaws. It also gets the emotion across very well with Brightheart's expression and the kits' words. Very nicely done!
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I cried so much at this scene! Love the picture, especially Brightheart's expression!
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omfg this one is so old and terrible i forgot how to draw cats or smth pls look at the newer one
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No crying til the en-
Ah screw it, get out your tissues guys.
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Aaawww... Their mother knows of course exactly what happened...
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... I kinda like how you drew the kits better in thus one. Everything else was WAAAAYYYY better in the second version
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Ouchβ¦. Β Those poor kits don't even knowβ¦ They only are guessing... Β Β Β
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EXCUSE ME yes it is good to
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Wow. Her kits made it even more depressing.
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Oh my glob, its so sad and ironic at the same time! It almost makes me cry! ):
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That part just made me think, "How are they going to tell the poor kits?"
But this is really beautifully drawn, I like how you draw the lines, some think some thin.
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Just finished reading this, so sad! Poor dustpelt!
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oh my god...this scene. i literally bawled for like 20 minutes omfg
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My fav character. Nooooooooooooo!
So sad but a really good dawing
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i know ; ; The Last Hope was the saddest of all the books ive read
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I just finished the last book yesterday.
I thought Hollyleaf's death was bad enough.
This was just heartbreaking.
Poor Dewkit is so naive about Ferncloud's death...
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Sad picture, But the words kinda cracked me up. x'D (I don't know rather to laugh or cry)..
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WOW Looks like an animation part! It's sad
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I'm smiling, and feeling disgusted right now(not at your skills, but at the drawing and the whole general feeling it invokes in me). A weird emotion.
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