Comments: 7
gbisus13 [2006-12-07 06:37:19 +0000 UTC]
yes, one day. hopefully.
because that is entrancing, imagery, and heartfelt.
this poem, and it's writer, deserve such loving.
cheers!
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bluebirdstock [2006-12-06 20:11:47 +0000 UTC]
it's good to see you writing again.
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servaVII [2006-12-05 22:19:31 +0000 UTC]
i just read this twice out loud. i think i'm in love.
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portraitofporcelian [2006-12-05 02:24:52 +0000 UTC]
i miss you writing. and i love this. and i love you.
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Darkpyrokitty [2006-12-04 02:35:54 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that's beautifully written. Great vocabulary. Well put together.
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nth-derivative [2006-12-03 21:42:16 +0000 UTC]
this is beautiful writing once again. it sucks that good writing often comes from really shitty emotions, realizations, times, and whateva.
at least the resulting vomit is good.
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wildmonky [2006-12-03 10:29:06 +0000 UTC]
This is very good.
"Until the ardent hazel
of a once so chimerical being
backslide to the
shiny glass epilogue." that's amazing.
And the ending. Love it.
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