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Published: 2013-01-27 08:15:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 32186; Favourites: 296; Downloads: 76
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[EDIT 5/1] Thanks for correcting my mistype.[EDIT 1/28] change a dialogue here, Thanks to ~
Quite busy here, sorry I can't reply all the comments.
My English is still not quite good as always, if you find any mistake in the dialogue, please please tell me.
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Comments: 41
So Sweet, but i want to hurl for some reason
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if i'm not mistaken i think you spelled the 1st 'morning' like this 'mornihg'
typing mistake?
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hehe no prob <3
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Thank you so much!!
I mistype it...OTZ
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I love how you represent Raph as such a caring brother in this page. Also how Donnie happily accepting the help as well. Such a sweet page. I adore your drawing style of then too. The way you color the pages are so vibrant and beautiful.
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Another beautiful page! Don is clearly very important to Raph and to the whole family. I love the little details like the spilt cereal and Don's flushed face when he wakes up.
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Hm... I've noticed the change in your style from the 1st page, but only now can I see it quite clearly. I like it ^^
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(Freaks out) Next page this is beyond cute I wanna read it all! Kawaii!Kawaii!
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this is amazing! i love tmnt ^^ and the way you draw makes them look cute ^^
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I love the way you draw Donnie. I have an expressions fetish, I just love awesome expressions, and you do such cute ones. ^^ Totally nice work.
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Will explain it in 3rd chapter~
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love this page! so many elements mixed up quite good together!
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I really like how you are blending your own style for the turtles with the Nick-design. And this whole thing just looks so pro! There's a few grammatical errors, perhaps you could get someone fluent in English to proof read? It's not too incriminating, tho. I'm guessing everyone understands the dialogue perfectly fine anyway
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Well, I don't have time to do that, it's a good idea, though.
If you find anything werid, just comment and I will correct it.
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I have a proof reader for my comic (I'm Norwegian my self), it's really helpful! I just send her the sketched pages with the dialogue and she points out my bloopers
What mostly caught my eye here "Donnie water is ready!!!", should be "Donnie, the water is ready!!!" However, my English is not so good either, so I'm probably missing something
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exept her blending does notn look goofy like the 2012 shows animation does (i still can't get over that )
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Heh, true! The original Nick design is so... clunky! This much better
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this looks neater and im liking they way they interact in this
fans should do the tmnt shows and animation
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Just love it how Raph looks after his brother all the time. Sooooooo lovely!
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Love it! If you'd like a little help, Mikey's sentence in the last panel would make a bit more sense if he said, 'The sleepyhead is finally awake!'
I'm so glad to have found your comic, the artwork is so pretty and the storyline is so cute! <3
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Really thanks for your suggestion!!
OMG, I totally forget about this word "awake", how could I being so stupid~XD
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just love how all of this going so well in the story [link]
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thanks a lot, I like your comics "long night", too~
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