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Published: 2010-07-14 00:10:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 4121; Favourites: 98; Downloads: 0
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Description 2nd of 3 commissions for of her character Bebe Adame. Crits?

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Comments: 18

GermanCityGirl [2011-03-08 08:54:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for this! She's been spotlighted in my latest journal !

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mzclark [2010-07-16 22:02:06 +0000 UTC]

cool. great pose as usual

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Tongman In reply to mzclark [2010-07-17 01:35:29 +0000 UTC]

Hopefully I'll get better! I've got a lotta work to do!

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R0K-MO [2010-07-15 04:59:28 +0000 UTC]

shoot man love it!! Crits ..... nothing comes to mind! I wont say ah I think it needs shading or something like that because I feel you accomplished what you set out for! I feel her balance, nice pose! great colors and I know her character just by looking at her.

Man Good Freaking Job!! Inspiring!

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Tongman In reply to R0K-MO [2010-07-15 05:03:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, man!

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HolyMane [2010-07-14 16:08:11 +0000 UTC]

crit! right! here is one without Deviant sugar
yes the jaw as the guy said hnm..

the legs seems really longer than they needed to be ,still they look nice actually

now the right boob looks pretty awkwardly small

her shoulders are too wide ,awkward the way you
placed em

maybe the abs are too straight ,her body is twisting a lil bit so!

oh and also the hookey stick thing..there is a whole pespective going on there , what makes it looks really long and awkward mainly as there is no foreshorneting happening on her body

well the designt is cool as the colours pretty sweet!

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Tongman In reply to HolyMane [2010-07-14 17:27:15 +0000 UTC]

Hey thanks for taking the time to pick my drawing apart! Haha! Nothing like a solid crit to push an artist toward perfection. Looks like it's more life drawing for me.

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SektrOne [2010-07-14 07:49:43 +0000 UTC]

awesome posture man!

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Tongman In reply to SektrOne [2010-07-14 17:25:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Still have trouble with the abs though.

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SektrOne In reply to Tongman [2010-07-14 18:45:26 +0000 UTC]

idk, try not putting so much detail. like only line 4 abs and let the eyes figure out where the other two go. just a thought

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keyks554 [2010-07-14 05:27:54 +0000 UTC]

kool

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Tongman In reply to keyks554 [2010-07-14 17:24:55 +0000 UTC]

Thx

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ionwhat [2010-07-14 05:15:19 +0000 UTC]

Damn dude. You should be mighty proud of the work you've been producing. I can see a serious level up. Good shit all around!

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Tongman In reply to ionwhat [2010-07-14 17:24:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot, man! Just gotta keep it going.

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lazymills1986 [2010-07-14 03:02:44 +0000 UTC]

wow sexy stuff. the costume is so awesome.

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Tongman In reply to lazymills1986 [2010-07-14 04:47:37 +0000 UTC]

=oD

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Devonition [2010-07-14 02:03:32 +0000 UTC]

Her jaw seems to be a little too far back, especially at the angle her head is in
But other then that, it's GREAT

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Tongman In reply to Devonition [2010-07-14 04:46:43 +0000 UTC]

Yea you're right. I'll fix that soon. Thanks!

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