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ToraNoKage13 — The Devil in my Dreams page 04
Published: 2009-05-27 21:16:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 7425; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 38
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PLEASE READ FROM RIGHT TO LEFT!!!!WARNING: This story may contains sexual themes and sensitive material, wich are not appropiate for either children or people, who may find this offensive!
With other words:
DON'T LIKE IT, DON'T LOOK AT IT!!!!!
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Sorry, for letting you wait for this, but the sketch to 6th page is a little late in, so there'l may be a bit time before I can submit the next few pages, probably. My apoligies.... Anyway, about the last panel: ......Let's never talk about it agin, k?
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Couple: AlucardXSeras
Manga/Anime: Hellsing
Art/Story: ToraNoKage13
Characters: Kohta Hirano
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I DO NOT TAKE CREDIT FOR THE CHARACTERS!
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Comments: 39
.....wait.....if she cant see anyone how can she shoot anyone?!?! ur mind has been messed all up.
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Whoa, great perspective in the last panel. Very Hellsing-like.
Well, now at least we know who is calling her. Alucard is calling his little Police girl.
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WHAT!? That's the one thing in that page wich sucks the most! O_O But of course, if you like, it, I appreciate it...^^
Thank you.
He iiiiisss.....! =W=
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I just said it was Hellsing-like. I didn't say that it doesn't suck. LOL
Just kidding. 
You're welcome, the perspective looks pretty good to me.
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GGRRRRRRR..... Just kidding!XD
Thank you, anyway^^ I hope I'll get better, doing some practice....
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LOL That face scared me. O_O
You're most welcome.
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Wow.... Even when I'm just online, I'm scary.... .__. XD!!!!!!!
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If my assumptions are right about the voice, gun gonna be useless Seras sorry.
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O____o..... You've just almost spoiled yourself to the next page!XD
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Oh yeah.... XD It's the best page so far, as far as I think!O_o X3
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*sees you have next page up* teehee ^__^
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The suspense is killing me. LOL! Good job. The only thing is her gun seems a bit big in the last cell.
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Thank you!^^ Yeah, you may be right.... -___-;;;
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The third of what seems to be becoming a very nice doujinshi, good that you corrected the spelling before I had time to notice
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ooo! this is getting exciting! GOOD JOB! I can't wait for what happens next! WEEEEE! >w< *FAAAAAAAVES!*
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Oh... Who is this???who is that wois???i cant wait to see more^^
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it is called "voice"^^ But, yeah, we are all wondering.....>:3 Mwahahah...!
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You left it hanging again. I'm so excited for the next page! (^^)
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It'll be submitted as soon as I'm done with the sketch to the few next pages!^^" Right now, I'm just stucked -____-
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Looks like Seras is edgy.
Your perspective for the last panel isn't all too bad. It seems a little odd at first, then it leaves off as alright. 
"Who is it there?!" Would make better sense as, "Who's there?!" or "Who is there?!"
"Come on out or I'll shot!" should be, "Come on out or I'll shoot!"
The English language is a tricky bastard. 
You can edit those up a bit later, but yeah, that's all I've noticed! Still, good work and I await the next pages.
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Dammit! I KNEW I wrote somthing wrong....!
But thank you so much for telling me!^^" I'll go change it know....
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