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Published: 2013-03-20 09:05:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 410; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 8
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Ebonsong [2013-03-20 17:28:05 +0000 UTC]

I like the top lighting and the rough halo around the flower.

The rose itself looks a bit fake with its perfect circle petals. Might be good to add more shading and/or highlights where each petal crosses the other. Also perhaps the next rose would look better if it was a bit more compact. I feel this one looks way too elongated to be a rose.

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toshi13go In reply to Ebonsong [2013-03-20 20:39:48 +0000 UTC]

thanks! You're right. Thats what I get for not using reference

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Ebonsong In reply to toshi13go [2013-03-20 22:03:09 +0000 UTC]

It's fairly good without a reference, but they do help yeah. Keep on practicing, your skills are really starting to shine.

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toshi13go In reply to Ebonsong [2013-03-20 22:29:47 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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