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Ebonsong [2013-03-27 17:50:48 +0000 UTC]

Great posture, love the angles. Their left arm seems a bit thin compared to the right one, the right one looks more in place.

The shadow under the right leg & hand is great & on her inner left thigh. It appears the head hangs out further than the hand, if so the shadow of the head should be showing on the ground in front.

I like the sand, looks almost like they're pulling up cloth though. Perhaps a few dots here/there would help make it look a bit more like sand. Did you use a reference for the pose at all? Would be nice to see a link to compare here.

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toshi13go In reply to Ebonsong [2013-03-27 18:01:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I guess, maybe so. Hey you could actually tell it was a she!How awesome...at first I was thinking it was definitely a she later I wasn't so sure.No I didn't use any reference so sorry

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Ebonsong In reply to toshi13go [2013-03-27 18:42:21 +0000 UTC]

Aaah you're right, I used the word 'her' in one of the sentences.

I actually thought it was a female from the start but I didn't want to say directly in case it was a very slim male or a neutral gender.

No worries, I think you did good with using no reference. You might not see it but from an outside view I think you're growing very quickly with your art. Keep this up, but as always, continue to have fun with it too!^^

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toshi13go In reply to Ebonsong [2013-03-27 18:49:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!Will do! I appreciate you always taking the time to look at my stuff thanks!

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Ebonsong In reply to toshi13go [2013-03-27 18:50:22 +0000 UTC]

I will continue to do so as long as you continue to challenge yourself & enjoy what you do.

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toshi13go In reply to Ebonsong [2013-03-27 19:27:37 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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