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Published: 2008-05-23 01:22:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 3458; Favourites: 176; Downloads: 45
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Description Uehrjkhgj coloured this while chatting so it might not be clean/finished/correct and such.


This is the protagonist from the September storyline: Head scientist Xavier. He was killed in a coup planned by his own subordinates and the entrepeneurs because they disagreed with his ruling system and laws (in the city of Truthlost, the scientists are an important class). It was mostly because of revenge on Menteur's part. After Xavier died, his machines sensed his absence and either self-destructed or stopped working because they were biomachines with the capacity to feel remorse. No one else could move them while he was gone.

So Xavier got shot, his body was thrown into the river and the rebels and rejects of the city kept his body to revive him. If he lives, his machines will self activate and they can use his machines. (kinda sad reason to let him live). Xavier's reaction when he awoke was a mixture of angst, hatred, confusion, jubilation, and mostly hunger. Everyone facepalmed. Now Xavier wants his status and city back, he still loves the people in Truthlost though. 8DD

This is an old drawing from 2005 holyshitold, I really, really don't want to burn your eyes but I think the red colour scheme had to go x_x AND I MADE HIM MORE EMOWANGST DO I GET A MUFFIN???
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novostars [2009-02-21 03:28:26 +0000 UTC]

YAY CLEAN LINES LOL. This is really great! Nice expression and color!

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tommy-tonebender [2008-06-11 23:41:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow... the improvement from 2005 to now is amazing. It looks like two completely different artists. I'm impressed! 8D

I can't get over how gorgeous this is.

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Reggamuffin [2008-05-24 13:50:40 +0000 UTC]

yes. you get a muffin. XD *jumps in your arms* eat meee!

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TotenVeloren In reply to Reggamuffin [2008-05-25 18:25:53 +0000 UTC]



BUT I CAN'T EAT THIS CUTE MUFFIN XDDD

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Reggamuffin In reply to TotenVeloren [2008-05-25 18:30:55 +0000 UTC]

ΓΆo but I'm not important for the world.

*jumps out your arms* ok then I go into the mixer.

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DustyLeaves [2008-05-24 08:08:12 +0000 UTC]

That is so, just so... amasing!
I don't know how to describe it, but that picture really is so trully amasing, it got a special felling to it!
*throws muffins at you*
AND the blood!! you are amasing at drawing blood, teach me right now!! D<
please make a tutorial some day?? ;_;
Or I will eat you'r skills!! >:3

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lordxelos [2008-05-24 07:27:37 +0000 UTC]

Awosome art ^^

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michellehail44 [2008-05-24 05:47:32 +0000 UTC]

TEH IMPROVEMENT~~

*gives you endless amount of muffins*

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Dropkick-Halfwit [2008-05-23 17:46:40 +0000 UTC]

Wow... I really love this. It'd make a great book cover, eh?

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kaitune [2008-05-23 17:44:50 +0000 UTC]

I truly want to express how much I love this picture of yours and his character background. Unfortunately, I know no word in English or in any language that is sexy enough to describe it so I will express my love using random nonsense words.

FKSDUFLIERUOEWIFODFJLKEUROISFJLSKRUOIERJLKFDJ!!!

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lupie-stardust [2008-05-23 09:20:26 +0000 UTC]

Verrry striking. <3

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Belazikkal [2008-05-23 08:44:14 +0000 UTC]

Checked the "urgh-old" link to the other pic. I have to say: I am impressed how much you have developed as an artist these last 3 years, Tot. In difference to me, who hasn't devloped that much since my discovery of the Spandau Diaries (yup, discovered that book in 2005... time flies)

You're right, the red colour-scheme had to go. I just hope you don't fall in the same trap considering colour scheme as many FPS games of recent have. You know: the colours that make up games like Gears of War and Call of Duty 4 seems to be brown, grey and black with sprinkles of red. WTF!? It looks like a fecking Nuremburg Party Rally, for crying out loud! Where's the colour (and the ghey)? Give me Mario Kart DS anyday... Hurray for ghey colours!

But your expressive use of red is always nice to see. Adds a much needed spot of colour to the neutral greys in this. Inspired by Tim Burton's Sweeney Todd, ma cherie? XD

Sorry for TL;DR comment. What I mean to say is: More red to the people!

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TotenVeloren In reply to Belazikkal [2008-05-30 07:51:13 +0000 UTC]

Well, to me..I was improving at a very slow rate compared to my other college friends due to my own reluctances in learning new things. >< Drawing soldaten and crapmachines has hindered me, haha. Thank you. We are all striving to improve, and you have improved as well.

I think I did fall into that trap somehow, a lot of my chars bear the similar colours. I'm an addict of 'Nuremburg Rally' colours LMAO, the fastest way to achieve colour harmony. Red is always a staple in my works..it holds a certain meaning to me. I'll keep experimenting with more blues and purples as I develop more characters.

Perhaps so, a little tint of red is always good. XD

Thank you very much for your wonderful feedback. Ah, tl;dr is only for the weak of mind. XD

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cheetahtrout [2008-05-23 06:24:14 +0000 UTC]

Hrrrr. This is another reason why I love you. Sweet compositions in blood, "ink" and red silk, packed in a nice backgroundstory.

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Sano-Ryuuj1n [2008-05-23 06:20:28 +0000 UTC]

absolutely loving the blood~ and the colours are amazing~

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Chickengirl [2008-05-23 06:18:31 +0000 UTC]

wow so nice... D: everything about it is awesome. he has such a sad story tho but i love his design.

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LouisDelacroix [2008-05-23 05:40:22 +0000 UTC]

Dia: *dangles muffins* *W*

HE IS PRETTY PLZ
PRETTY LIEK A ZOMBIE <3

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WolfknightlordJ [2008-05-23 04:42:10 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful. I love the blood effect.

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MIT-Hellan [2008-05-23 04:25:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh Really, his design looks much better now o3o

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gdpr-2897288 [2008-05-23 04:14:00 +0000 UTC]

GOD YOU'VE IMPROVED SO MUCH. DX

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Whoop-de-freakin-do [2008-05-23 04:02:21 +0000 UTC]

the blood is awesome! i love this pic.
you get a bajillion muffins for changing the colors,ke emowangst better.

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azarath [2008-05-23 04:00:34 +0000 UTC]

Gaaah you've improved so much I am jealoooouus *eats your brain and gains your knowledge*

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TotenVeloren In reply to azarath [2008-05-23 04:04:25 +0000 UTC]

HOMGGGG LANNNN 8DD
wtfux dude..that took 3 years. Long time plz *.*

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azarath In reply to TotenVeloren [2008-05-23 04:28:25 +0000 UTC]

HAI THAR. I AIN'T DEAD QUITE YET

That is a much bigger improvement than a lot of people. And dude you've only been drawing for like...4-5 years. So you can shove it plzkthzbye. :3

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Xiaine [2008-05-23 03:45:04 +0000 UTC]

hee I like the way you did the blood XDDD Its all splattery and gushy and *u*!!!! XDD Awesome job XD

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MisforMurmur [2008-05-23 03:43:57 +0000 UTC]

I just can't get enough!

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Henada [2008-05-23 03:25:48 +0000 UTC]

The blood is so
pretty. I want to touch it. @______@

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Jane10lo [2008-05-23 03:09:43 +0000 UTC]

He would get along with Byron... and Charlie would freaking love him since he's covered in blood!

Charlie would be a happy vampire rope :3

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ToxxicRedd [2008-05-23 02:48:18 +0000 UTC]

*throws muffins*
:3

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Twilights-Illusion [2008-05-23 02:34:48 +0000 UTC]

What a powerful back story...the image of him really shows his story. I love the contrast of him before and after...keep up your lovely stories <3

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Moonlight-Sacrifice [2008-05-23 02:17:44 +0000 UTC]

The revamp is wonderful. 8D

I love all of their expressions; I shall be interested to see some more development of these characters.

Ooh, I'm totally jealous of your nerve to resurrect old stories. I could never do that. ;_;

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hokuto [2008-05-23 02:01:24 +0000 UTC]

YAY EMOWANGST!

I find this very awesome. Those are some freaking amazing bloodstains and drips.

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topax [2008-05-23 02:00:18 +0000 UTC]

i give him muffins?

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TotenVeloren In reply to topax [2008-05-23 02:10:54 +0000 UTC]

He will swallow them then HUG AND BLEED ALL OVER YOUUUUU, being half dead/in a coma for 15 years is crap 8DDD

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topax In reply to TotenVeloren [2008-05-23 14:27:54 +0000 UTC]

AFJSDLJDSALSDFJLAKJSF! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MY CLOOOOOOOOOTHES! XD their dark colored so it doesn't matter.

kekekekeke half-dead people are nice desuuuuu. MORE MUFFINS!

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lilpixie132 [2008-05-23 01:57:34 +0000 UTC]

Woah thats creepy xD

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Rosiana [2008-05-23 01:53:43 +0000 UTC]

Holycrap. This piece is amazing. I love Xavier. What the fuck. The blood on his head...and having the little doll is creepy. I looked at the old piece HOLY CRAPPU SO MUCH IMPROVEMENT 8DDDD

I love that you're sharing so much with an old story line. <3 I'm in love with it. I give you fanart soon yes.

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indubitanter [2008-05-23 01:34:35 +0000 UTC]

I seriously love the coloring and the blood in it Toten. Of course, I'm somewhat of a gore-whore, so I don't think that really counts as anything. 8D LOL Emo-wangst is fine, as long as it's not the "BAWWWWWW KYRIEEEEEEEEE *an hero's*" type. 8D WE ALREADY HAVE ENOUGH EMO PRETTYBOYS LIKE THAT. XD

The concept and character design is lovely. XD I'm really loving the story, Toten. =3

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Mel-P [2008-05-23 01:26:43 +0000 UTC]

beautifuulll *___________*

He looks confused and in pain ;A; *gives him a hug and some dinner* 8D <3

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