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trcactus — smudged soul

Published: 2005-01-13 07:51:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 85; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description not sure if its where it belongs, but who cares. this is something that needs to be said to someone. not sure if they'll read it, but atleast its here
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Comments: 7

DareToLove [2005-01-13 20:38:49 +0000 UTC]

Mm. Nice work - the last two verses are my favorite. And in the second verse, last line, 'engulfs' - good word choice. nice

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trcactus In reply to DareToLove [2005-01-13 21:06:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks, it means alot that someone like you like it

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DareToLove In reply to trcactus [2005-01-13 21:10:52 +0000 UTC]

Bah - don't say 'someone like me.' I am of you you are of me. We are of the same stuff. We are artists.

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trcactus In reply to DareToLove [2005-01-13 21:12:42 +0000 UTC]

ahh, good point. ^^

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darklair666 [2005-01-13 07:56:17 +0000 UTC]

this poem is amazing. I liked this verse, but I think you missed a word.

"Your soul is pure but smudged
We may not the guiding light
But we can still guide you
Out of the darkness and into the light "

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trcactus In reply to darklair666 [2005-01-13 08:36:46 +0000 UTC]

thanks, i just write these things down in one sitting, so i tend to make a few mistakes in grammer. thanks for the comment and the fav. it means alot that you like it. ill make the change right now. ^^

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darklair666 In reply to trcactus [2005-01-13 17:00:55 +0000 UTC]

its ok. glad you are not mad at me or anything. lol.

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