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Published: 2010-03-04 00:57:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 830; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 16
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Two edits: I am unhappy with the scientist. If anyone knows of a stock I can use as a reference of a face in this pose, that would be great. I like his pose, and his nose, but nothing else. Also, his name is now Victor Braedon. Doctor Victor Braedon. Just don't call him Vicky.*******
It is le finished! Yay!
Adam and (the scientist). Please submit names for said scientist. It is a boy, but is kinda femmie. I can't think of one. He's evil-ish. Tampering with human life and all.
Adam wants to rip his face off. He really does! Eventually in the story, you'll learn why he wants this guy dead so badly.
In case you can't tell, Adam is being restrained.
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Thank you! I'm currently working on the comic, which updates on thursdays! I'm also doing what every comic artist aspires to do: work ahead of deadlines, haha.
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great times, looking forward to it
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Shaun.
Alaster.
Baker.
Cooper.
Rodger.
Johnson.
Jeremiah.
Moses.
I'd try to avoid anything too obvious. Don't use a name which just means "evil in another language. If his name needs to mean something look for something a little less moral/ethical driven. He's a scientist, so maybe something related to knowledge or wisdom. Or if there's a good name meaning "forbidden" that would work as a middle ground.
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Good idea. I didn't want to be too obvious. I may name him Michael, after a relative I don't like, haha. Maybe misspell it, like Mikhail.
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Just remember not to write it that way when people say it aloud. After all it would still sound the same.
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Looks interesting...Ok names:
1. Sheijta (sheijtan is the arabic word for devil)
2. charles (fits to his snob-like look - no offense to all charles out there^^)
3. Loki (a nordic god - he was an evilish guy I think)
btw: wasn't Seth from Egypt?
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I don't know. Seth was on a website that I found, and they said that it was a Greek variation on Set. I kinda like charles, but it reminds me of Xavier. He's just a white um... "American". Maybe even british. Hmm... charles...
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You wanted a name? If the main character is a name like Adam, perhaps he should have a name like Lucifer? Or something like Beelezabub? Or something played off of those names? I mean he is playing around with God's creations.
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That is true.
I think I want to stay away from the obvious evil names, but something that is also a commonly used name is good. A little outlandish is okay too.
I was thinking along the lines of Peter, or even Seth (seth can mean evil, according to the Greeks, I also just came up with those) Just something that is used often, but the meaning of which has kinda been lost in the name's normalcy.
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True. Then, if you want to do something like that, use something that starts with a 'S', 'L', 'Z', or 'V'. They just sound more sinister that way.
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I agree. For some reason, those letters starting a name do seem more sinister.
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Can't wait to see what you have in store for this.
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Thank you! It's a very long, complicated story, and I'm going to try to stay away from the norms so that it's original.
There's another part of the story that begins about 100 or so years in the future written by my friend (in real life) ~Rosethorn-Halo It's called For the Greater Good, and can be found at [link] if you're interested. She has a few more pages up than I do, but only about four so far. I think we may get into an update competition, haha!
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I will look it up when I have the time! Thanks!
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No problem.
Thank you for the comment, and for taking the time in the future to look.
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Thanks! I have the first page colored too, but I need to wait to put it up....
*anxious*
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I can't wait for these things....
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