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tubbums32 — The Void
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Published: 2017-05-11 08:00:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 899; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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The last thing I remember
Is getting closed inside
Powerless and helpless and
Petrified

Trapped inside this capsule of a life
I can feel my world shifting, drifting

Beyond my control
Fighting just to breathe
Blinded to the outside
Knocking from the inside
Let me out!
I can only see this world,
But I know there’s more outside
Hidden beneath the surface
I can see it in my mind

Spiraling away
Everything I’ve known, destroyed
Drifting into nothingness,
We are drawn into the void

Floating through the endlessness
Spinning in this weightlessness
Disconnected consciousness
Infinite nothingness

Blinded to reality
Disembodied, I can’t see
As I wake from hypersleep
Drawn into the void

I can only see this world
But I know there’s more outside
Hidden beneath the surface
I can see it in my mind

Spiraling away
Everything I’ve known, destroyed
Drifting into nothingness
We are drawn into the

Endless abyss
Metamorphosis
Floating through nothingness
Weightlessness
This altered consciousness

Endless abyss
Metamorphosis
Floating through nothingness
Weightlessness
This altered consciousness

Colors and shapes surround me
The world is spinning fast
Thrown to the edge,
Trying to sort out my past

I was on track,
But now it is clear
My intent was so sure, invariable
Now I am forced to face the end

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Comments: 4

AlwaysDaydream [2017-05-11 13:08:22 +0000 UTC]

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So this is VERY relative on so many levels which is why I cannot say it is entirely original. That being said, I think what you have written is one of the best interpretations of this feeling that I have read. it has great flow and uses impact vocabulary.
That was my impression before listening to the track. After listening to it, I can say it is something that I can definitely appreciate and will surely download. The words are great by themselves, but the way they have been put together with the music adds to them. (which I think is often not the case) Kudos on this great musical creation and I will definitely be sharing this music with everyone!

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Soulreaver1408 [2017-08-03 20:11:16 +0000 UTC]

"I can only see this world,
But I know there’s more outside
Hidden beneath the surface
I can see it in my mind"

For me, personally, this echos how I feel about my current spot in life. I see the sporadic, creative, and endless life outside, but I am ultimately locked inside my own rut and the unchanging routine we all grew up saying that we would avoid...While at the same time...the idea of change is almost taboo....to concerned about what would happen if something changed. That fear of the unknown causes the wonderful images of a different life outside of normality to turn to an "Endless Abyss", or a "Void".

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Sacramosis [2017-05-13 21:23:49 +0000 UTC]

This is very relatable and powerfully introspective to humanity in a way, admitting and expressing deep thoughts like this is not easy but does reward us with a better understanding of ourselves and the world. Thanks for sharing dude.

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Markus43 [2017-05-11 21:24:10 +0000 UTC]

falling

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