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MichaelJohnMorris [2017-02-14 21:28:29 +0000 UTC]

The feels. ^^

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DrynnBin [2017-01-15 23:23:22 +0000 UTC]

Hi!  I'm from ProjectComment !  

This is so cute!  I love the roses in the background and the pastel look of the whole thing, it creates a calm and soft affect that really fits with the idea behind the drawing.  But of course, there's always something to work on, so here we go!  Both Rake and Pepper's legs look too long and/or detached form their body.  Drawing this position, I can imagine, is difficult, but it might help to sketch just one character first, then the other in another color.  Rake's left leg (the one crossed over) looks like it's twisted in an odd direction, almost like the toes are trying to reach underneath the other foot.  Pepper's face looks like it's melding with her neck, in a way.  Her jawline needs to be a little more accentuated.  Both of their faces look a little flat, but that may also be a style/design choice.  It looks like you wanted their hands to appear clasped together, although it looks like Rake's hand is just sitting over Pepper's.  Now, if there's anything difficult about hair, it's making it look natural and flowy.  It's hard, but comes with practice!  The end of Pepper's braid looks jagged and sharp, as does Rake's, but like I said, it all takes practice!  You've gotten the hang of shading, and the proportions (other than the legs) all look like you've gotten them down. 

I really love this piece, keep practicing, and don't stop drawing! <3 have a great day!

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KingSaltyVampire101 [2017-01-15 15:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Im from ProjectComment And this is an amazing piece of art i love the warm colours and how good they look in contrast! Tge pose is almost flawless ♡.♡
However, the hair would look better without white lines and  the lines would look cleaner if they were all black
But overall, good pieve ^w^

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DregonV8 [2017-01-14 06:32:08 +0000 UTC]

Oooh nice

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