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Published: 2005-06-17 10:00:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 426; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 6
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Wiggly and Jiggly, slime cute.Wiggly and Jiggly, really cute.
Wiggly and Jiggly, what`s the point?
Wiggly and Jiggly, cute`s the point!
Wiggly and Jiggly, cute, cute, cute.
Wiggly and Jiggly, better than a suit.
Wiggly and Jiggly, slime, sly slime.
Wiggly and Jiggly, don`t like lime.
Wiggly and Jiggly, Jiggly and Wiggly.
Wiggly and Jiggly, really cuddly.
Wiggly and Jiggly, about to end.
Wiggly and Jiggly, slime never end.
Wiggly and Jiggly, I say sad goodbye.
Wiggly and Jiggly, slime no goodbye.
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Comments: 15
YES! I love the smlime... hehehehe it was interesting poem but could have been improved on but it is unique for sure... and again kudos on the slime man good subject for sure!
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Turton says, "Thank you. Good bye. Have a nice day. Slime fan am I."
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Lol, I liked it, kinda cute, cant say it didnt make sence though moest poetry only makes sence to the author.
Yup slimes the rpg kind, uhu all wiggly n' jiggly. rofl!!
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Turton says, "thank you, thank you, thank you.
good bye. slime fan am I."
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YAAAAAAAAY!! rofl I spent such a long time trying to find this poem again, thanks for replying.
zoink, fave ^^
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Jr. says, "Thanks again... you made a world of difference to my student (turton)."
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it was o.k., but a 1 year old could have done better
by catluver's friend
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Jr. says, "Dear Catluver... first, thanks for responding and your comments. Second, I know you are entitled to express your opinion... However, maybe you didn't realize my student was a young Japanese boy... You have actually hurt his feelings very much, and he hasn't been very interested in writing poems since he saw your comments. He think everything he does is stupid now. So, as a favor to me do you think you could spare the time to find something positive about his work? It would make a HUGE difference. I would consider you a great person and we would gladly start watching your work carefully."
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It's Confusing... that's remembering me some tedious monster from a MMORPG...
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Confusing because I've never hear about liking slimes.
MMORPG: Multiple-Member-Online-Role-Playing-Game or somethig near...
And the slimes I know are from MapleStory [link] ... so similar to your slimes.
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Turton says, "Hey, thanks for the response... yet, there are two things I want to know:
1. What part of my poem is confusing?
2. What is MMORPG?
Finally, whatever MMORPG is, it will never ever be better than the slimes of Dragon Quest."
Jr. says, "Do you agree that Dragon Quest is the best too, or do you like another game?"
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It's very unique...but I don't believe that it is a representation of what you can do. Try to write another form of poetry. I can see what you were hoping to achieve, but you missed to mark. To you, this may seem as if it makes sense, but as an outsider, it realy doesn't. But, please, do continue writing! Don't give up! I hope to hear/read some more of your works! Good luck!
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Turton says, "Thank you for your reply. I will continue writing more poems and I will be happy to read your poems or thoughts on your site. Thank you."
Jr. says, "Your words are very helpful to my student and appreciated. Thanks."
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