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Ifauit [2012-01-03 05:01:51 +0000 UTC]
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The vision of this piece is excellent; I believe that the view and design of it seem to ebb and flow very well. The point was well delivered and received. However, in terms of originality I think it lacks in a few different areas being that this looks like a lot of your other works in the sense of lighting, style, and design. Furthermore, the technique is very polished in some areas, but lacking in others. Albeit the case, I have a feeling that the technique is contributory to the design process. Thusly, the impact is well received.
In depth: the pieces colors adequately show the setting and the design is rather simple. One of the things I was taught in art school is that design shouldn't always be focused on the center. (or maybe so much on the subject but on the environment as I think it would add to the effect of this piece; it is a nature scene after all) This may be nit picky, but the fact remains that this is trend in your artwork you might want to change up. The lighting and orientation of the piece is makes me feel a tad sad that you didn't vary the intensity of lighting.
But I digress, as I said before the orientation of the piece works; although I'm a bit set back that this is how it is. I must account for the fact that your pieces always draw on the simpler things. And that is something as I as an artist can appreciate. I like the tone and the feel of it as well.
Lastly, for minor suggestions I suggest you vary the method and prose. The style and technique are very well crafted and need not be worked on. However, the lighting is realistic, but UNrealistic at the same time and could be worked upon with sketches.
Rating: 6.8
(from the content on this site I think it is worthy of the spot of daily deviation though.)
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starsleeps [2012-01-03 03:36:21 +0000 UTC]
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This is very nice, I have a few things to point out, but it is overall very nice and very nicely done. ^^
First off, I would like to say I love seing Cloud in his android form.
The colours get very nicely together, and give a warm and comfortable overall look, that is visually pleasing. Very nice job on this.
This is not something you see everyday, so I can see why it received a daily deviation. It almost seems beyond Earth itself, but is still homely and welcoming.
This was beautifully executed, the painting technique is, Ahem- "Love <333"
There are a few small things that could be fixed. The biggest minor detail is the eyes. They seem too be staring past the butterfly. If his right eye was a bit closer in to the middle, I think he would look more concentrated on the butterfly.
In conclusion, a very well done piece with a fantastic feel to it.
~*Pika-Pika-Pikahu
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XxShirokoxX [2010-04-04 16:39:59 +0000 UTC]
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Well, Extvia, another stunning piece from you!! Please forgive me if I don't do well with this critique-- It is my first ever. So here goes, wish me luck! As per your usual, you have vibrant, attention-catching colors, and the piece its self is composed in a very pleasing but interesting manner. The detail you put into it is also quite remarkable... I, personally, sat and looked at it for at least five minutes trying to take it all in!! However, there are a few elements in this piece that I perceive to be awkward... I feel as though the tree branch that the figure is sitting on is a bit awkwardly shaped, in terms of perspective in relation to your character. I feel is though the part of the branch by your character's paws should be just a bit wider, and that the part of the branch which extends to the background should be placed a bit further down and to the left. The only other qualm I have with this piece is that the figures left ear (actually, right ear, but to us it looks like the left) should be moved down a little bit on the head... When compared to the right ear, it looks a bit longer and differently placed on the head... Even with those thoughts having been made apparent, this is a fantastic work. I'm still in awe at the layering and depth in this picture (such as with the apple and leaves on the right side)!! Your use of lighting and shadows is brilliant, and this is a captivating work of art.
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TysonTan In reply to XxShirokoxX [2010-04-04 17:10:08 +0000 UTC]
You're acting so quick! XD
Thank you for your critique!
Your hints are really helpful^^
Artists can be blind when they focus on something but lose his control on other parts of a picture. I'll try practice more and hope I can improve in the future!
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KalLance9349 [2018-03-21 15:42:01 +0000 UTC]
So your androids can consume organic foods?
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Spade-Master [2016-04-02 03:22:20 +0000 UTC]
Cute! definitely a favorite of mine
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esmashwey [2013-11-12 07:28:04 +0000 UTC]
nice
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shadow-warrior47 [2013-09-21 01:26:19 +0000 UTC]
Okay I have like two questions....
1) you said they are robotic beings so wouldn't that mean they don't need to eat?
2) I pretty sure this isn't the first time somebody has asked this but can I get a character like this made for me?
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shadow-warrior47 In reply to TysonTan [2013-09-21 05:22:44 +0000 UTC]
OK I got it and not a bad idea for the food thing but an idea could be having their technology based off how we make energy though food....maybe I'm thinking to hard on this one. Love the artwork though
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windstromfuchs [2013-07-13 10:40:18 +0000 UTC]
WOW.... I'm speechless..... The Pigture ist buitiful....
I wish i can draw as you...
WIth wich Programm you have make this pigture?
Photoshop?
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julzzae [2013-02-11 18:42:18 +0000 UTC]
Aw, that looks amazing!
Also, SYNC seems like a cool idea for an MMO of sorts--but it may just be my video game addiction speaking. Anyways, I love your art style!
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WoodRata [2013-01-21 22:35:22 +0000 UTC]
me encantan todos tus dibujines :3
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Auroncramp [2013-01-18 02:18:04 +0000 UTC]
Awesome art, colors and shadows are fantastic.
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monica52404 [2013-01-13 06:45:23 +0000 UTC]
i love your pics
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Blossom-Of-Dreams [2012-12-24 04:11:13 +0000 UTC]
I really like your artwork. It's very inspiring to me.^_^
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Royce-Barber [2012-10-05 08:03:15 +0000 UTC]
Why haven't you made an anime series with all of your characters?!??!
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TysonTan In reply to Royce-Barber [2012-10-06 00:49:02 +0000 UTC]
I think it's because characters don't make story. I'm learning script writing at the moment.
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Royce-Barber In reply to TysonTan [2012-10-06 20:47:52 +0000 UTC]
I'm great at writing really strange short stories! I used to watch a lot of anime. Someday you and I shall work together, I hope. Here is a poem I was working on a few years ago, I called it "Preposterous-Lullaby": [link]
Basically all I did was pick out random words and make a huge nonsensical poem, but its easy enough to make sense out of it, it just needs gaps filled in.
Script writing boils down to;
1. Randomly generated character profiles.
2. Randomly generated story outline.
3. Fill in the gaps and plot holes, and make the characters super sexy (you have that covered!)
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Cecr0pia [2012-08-28 04:31:43 +0000 UTC]
SO. PRETTY. AAAAGH.
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MorganaTwist [2012-06-21 12:55:53 +0000 UTC]
this looks an awful lot like the cloud avatar in Secondlife sold by Apelz avatar shop. :3 Lovely coloring and shading and depth! Awesome robot bunnies work as well love it!
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pinl101 [2012-06-20 11:14:19 +0000 UTC]
Cool. ^^
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sciguy007 [2012-06-15 04:36:59 +0000 UTC]
Is that butterfly a character in SYNC? Because there's one in the Fox and Vestige drawing too. I feel like it's important somehow.
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Gwenvar [2012-05-14 13:38:34 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! It's so cute!
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ChibiLoveMangaka [2012-04-16 19:29:37 +0000 UTC]
D8
You deserve the watch~! OuQ
You have talents!
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You! Watch this: [link]
It's awful, i know...But still? V__V
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wishfulbunny [2012-03-08 03:18:47 +0000 UTC]
It so cute I like the character's design and the shading too!
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bubbles46853 [2012-02-05 13:52:49 +0000 UTC]
May I hug him?
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bubbles46853 [2012-02-05 13:51:34 +0000 UTC]
Cute!!!
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ChelseaEclipse [2012-01-10 20:06:39 +0000 UTC]
When I first saw her I thought that you drew an anthro version of Leafeon. This character looks amazing! And.. I like the shading. It's so nice to eyes. : D Background looks wonderful too! C8
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koko-distore [2012-01-10 07:19:25 +0000 UTC]
the color proportion seems so calm..
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OfficerTroll [2012-01-03 06:15:28 +0000 UTC]
this looks so boss @o@
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FFVII-Sephiroth [2012-01-03 05:32:37 +0000 UTC]
Very well done, great color and shading really beings out the way of the forest. Inst-Fave
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Sorciechan [2012-01-03 05:06:55 +0000 UTC]
This one particular android blends well with her surroundings. This was drawn very well.
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CaroRichard [2012-01-03 04:11:41 +0000 UTC]
The choice of colors... and the background... and the touch... and ... well everything ! I have to look closely at this picture to learn... really nice one! Congrats for the DD!
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FurryFoxEars [2012-01-03 03:40:18 +0000 UTC]
Its cute and lovely!.... That´s all!... ^w^
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Neko-Leara [2012-01-03 03:34:28 +0000 UTC]
Simply amazing! The characters, the colours, everything fits perfectly!!!
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Nozami [2012-01-03 03:14:29 +0000 UTC]
Wow this is so cool I luv it this has to go to favorites luv it
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static3585 [2012-01-03 02:57:58 +0000 UTC]
4 words
that
is
really
cool c:
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kaylarepp [2012-01-03 02:57:30 +0000 UTC]
adorable!
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MasterTygan [2012-01-03 02:52:28 +0000 UTC]
Adorable!!!! ^-^
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LighttheChao [2012-01-03 02:16:36 +0000 UTC]
your artwork looks amazing!! I can't believe I've never noticed it until today!! Good thing I learned of an artist like you to look forward to in this new year!
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