eringonz [2002-02-07 01:06:07 +0000 UTC]
i *like* this piece.
i think the lines are great; they draw your eye to first the larger text, then on to the smaller text pieces...
i like pieces that tell me where to look...sometimes vaguery is..well, vague.. lol
the color is great, balance and contrast are just wonderful...
two thumbs up!
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splat [2002-02-06 23:32:41 +0000 UTC]
The use of different symbols is going a bit overboard (arrows, circle with arrow, radiation symbol, etc.). Picking 1 or 2 would be better.
I really like how it flows across the page. The text on the right also adds a nice touch because it doesn't grab your attention, yet it adds depth.
Nice job.
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