Winged-Ego [2007-01-24 21:09:46 +0000 UTC]
You did a great job with the coloring.
However, I think maybe you should've put a little more depth into Wakka's hair. In the projected version, his hair is one flat color. In Lulu's hair, you showed that there was light reflecting off of it, and that there were also areas with no light. I feel like you could've done that with Wakka's hair too.
I love the way you did the skin tones (with pastel, I'm assuming) for both of them. For example, the small version of Lulu. The difference in value around the chest area and on her left arm. Overall, it seems that you do very light shading. Don't be afraid to go really dark, but just on the areas that need it.
I commend you on doing Wakka's headband. In my original unaltered version [link] , it was such a hassle to get the design right. Yours looks spot-on.
I also want to point out that there wasn't supposed to be a gap between Wakka and Lulu's legs, that was actually the trail of Lulu's dress. (If you notice the original in the link, you see what I mean.)
Anyway, thank you for taking time out to color this! It is truly appreciated.
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