fabricatedxlove [2006-05-21 05:49:33 +0000 UTC]
Since Advanced Critique is encouraged, I would like to share my opinion.
I adore the tree. It looks really, really good.
The lupe looks really good, I like the style you're trying. My only advice is to try making the neck not so big and long and the head a tad bit bigger. If you study other styles, also (even real dogs will work), you will learn how their body works in the pose you are trying.
My overal opinion is: It's great! I'd love to see more!
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uglyswan In reply to fabricatedxlove [2006-05-21 19:54:12 +0000 UTC]
Thanks :3 I must have re-done the tree thousands of times over... never made a good-looking tree til now.
Yeah, when I asked for critique on Neo, lots of people said I needed to tweak my anatomy.
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