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uiowert7io34 — J.I Naruto part 3
Published: 2011-10-15 03:03:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 652; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Description {Last time on J.I. Naruto "SHUT UP, SHUT UP, SHUT UP! You HAVE NO CLUE WHAT SASUKE IS FEELING RIGHT, NONE AT ALL!"(Sakura starts tearing up as Zaya looks at her with a demon like grin and saids to her in a cheerful manner) "Thank you madam may I have another?" (Sakura became angry and walked next to Naruto and cried on his shoulder) (Naruto was confused as she patted her head as Hinata looked angry and wanted to kill a bitch). (Naruto looked at everyone as how they all were arguing and messing around and wondered to himself if they'll ever make it to the enemy campground)

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(Hinata looked angry and tensed up seeing her old rival from her teenage life sobbing over her man) (She ran over and pushed Sakura off her man and grabbed Naruto like it was a long lost treasure a pirate lost and screamed at Sakura saying) "DON'T YOU EVER TOUCH MY MAN YOU MOTHER**** SON OF A ***** I WORKED TO *****HARD TO**** AND***** WHILE YOU****AND***** WHILE***I WORKED MY *** OFF MY ENTIRE**** LIFE TO IMPRESS MY MAN SO HE COULD LOVE ME!!!" (Everyone in the room looked as Hinata thinking that she has over done it and looks at Sakura starting to tear up and sob more as Hinata sadly said to her). Gome…. gomenasai (she bows as she apologizes and, kisses Naruto on the cheek< head back to her post and tries to calm down). (Jiraya thought that he needed to get things down before Naruto boasted out and said) " Ok everyone I hope we got all the drama out in the clear because we still need to get Orochimaru" (Sakura cleared up her tears and head back with Tsunade and Zaya as Jiraya said to Naruto still getting over what happened)(Naruto went in the middle of the crowd still wondering if things cleared up as everyone looked at Naruto with full attention as Tsunade looks at Naruto and says to him) "Alright Naruto looks like everyone got what they need out of there system what is the plan." (Naruto cleared up his throat before Jiraya rudely interrupted the young Commander) "Well the plan is that we will infiltrate Orochimarus' campout by 11 o'clock tonight and…..

(The blond commander was baffled as his old master has rudely interrupted him at his time of glory and said to him) "Hey Jiraya remember even though you're a warlord, I'm still the commander of this fleet" (Jiraya looks at Naruto unmoved and said) "Well remember what you said if I came with you….."(Naruto starts to think and remember that he let him do the mission his way as he says to him) "Oh yeah I forgot" (Jiraya looks back at everyone while Naruto looks disappointed and Hinata feeling bad for him and say aloud) "Alright then like I was saying to everyone." (Jiraya took about 15 minutes to discuss the plan) "Alright then everyone knows what to do?" (Everyone yelled with excitement as Naruto and Hinata are waiting at the Airship and Tsunade tells Jiraya) "Alright then I'm going to get the rest of my squad to get ready we will meet you at the hot spot." (Jiraya looks at her with a grin replying to her) "Great and when all this is over maybe we can go out for dinner?"(Tsunade slaps Jiraya to Narutos military force as 10 people fell trying to catch Jiraya as all 11 of them fell including Jiraya)(Tsunade said to him with a blush on her face and said to him as she walked away) "You never changed a bit over the years have you?" (Jiraya got up from the crows as he says back to the blond women) "You haven't changed yourself Tsunade [giggles]." (Tsunade looks back as her girls are following her and said to him in a sweet manner) "Baka!"  (Naruto yelled out to Jiraya from the military airship) "HEY ARE YOU GETTING ON OR WHAT, SHE WILL BE THERE WHEN SHE GETS THERE!!!" (Jiraya looks at his grown up student as he smiles to him and says) "Alright, Alright I'm coming." (Jiraya was getting up with his military heavy armor on him, getting on the ship as the men that caught him was getting on as well.)

(Three hours has passed that was to others felt like days as Naruto and Hinata has the lead room and was making out there while Jiraya was telling stories and telling about all his glory days when he was still warlord when they finally made it to the spot where they where suppose to meet at) (Naruto looks around when they landed from a 50 mile radios from the enemy territory looking for tsunade and asked Jiraya) "Hey Master, Where are the girls?" (Jiraya was getting his stuff prepared  as he hears thunder clouds are coming as he told Naruto) "Don't worry about them Naruto we need to focus on how to get to Orochimaru on time before they get away from us like they always do."(Naruto looks up at the sky and say to himself) "This won't be no ordinary fight isn't it….Sasuke" (Naruto focuses back onto the main priority while he follows Jiraya and came up to their men and said to them) "Alright we need to keep you on standby. As Hinata is in charge we will head to the spot and we will give you the signal. But we will need 2 men to Assist us" (Two men from the rear come up without moment's notice and said to Naruto and Jiraya) "We will go ahead with you sir!" (Naruto smiles and said softly but loud enough for everyone for them to hear) "Alright then let's move out!" (Jiraya, Naruto, and the two assistant went off to settle once and for all with Jiraya)

{At the enemy grounds}

(Sire, we had intruders wondering our perimeter….shall I make a note of movement sir) (A man with pale white skin and black hair with snake live viper eyes said to the servants with a evil tone in his voice)  "Not at my little puppet…we will need their help on a little project (looks on the right side of his shoulder) am I right…Sasuke?" (Sasuke came out from the shadows with a black cloak with blue and green marine shirt with a pair of jeans of the same color) "Yes….. Warlord of the South."  (Orochimaru takes a sip of red wine from his wine glass and says to the servant) "That will be all Clouse."(Clouse the servant has left the room as he came to walked up to Sasuke and asked him) "Tell me Sasuke….. Has the young women arrived yet" (Sasuke Nodded to Orochimaru and said to him) No sir she has no…….. (Itachi came out with another Sasuke next to him and both said to him) Sir…..she has arrived. (Orochimaru clapped his hands and said to the clones) "Excellent my boys, Excellent, now let her in. (Itachi goes out and a moment later the clone of Itachi brings in a women of ruby flaming red hair with orange jeans with a flame mark on her left thigh.) (Orochimaru approached the women and said to her) Ohohoho it's wonderful to have you in such short notice. (The women nods her head to him and says to him) "Alright snake man, (looks up at him) what is this deal you want from me?" (Orochimaru looks at her and says in a evil laugh) "Oh don't be in such a rush we got time, why don't we relax why we discuss our deal don't you think (looks at her with devious eyes) SCARLET BLASÉ" (Thunder clouds has came in and made a big boom outside the window as they went to the dining room to eat).

(Back where Tsunade Sakura and Zaya are,Zaya starts to shiver of blood lust as Sakura looks at her and ask) "Zaya what the matter with you, you're acting stranger than usual." (Zaya felt weird herself as she felt fangs where growing and a howling sound were banging all over her head) (Tsunade came to her and ask if anything ok as Zaya said to her) "Don't worries I'm fine; it's just a little head ache." (Zaya looked outside the window and said to herself) "I have a feeling it's not Sasuke Nor Orochimaru I will have to face on this dark night."

{As Everyone was getting to position its only 2 hours before the showdown begins}

{Orochimaru has some kind of deal with this new woman}
{And Jiraya and Naruto are getting closer every minute to their destination for a fight beyond comprehension)

(And there's been tension all around the girls since the beginning especially with Zaya)

(Could there be a connection with these two girls)

(Please stay tuned for J.I Naruto Part 4)

(Battle Rumble of the Strongest)
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Comments: 18

Heavy-d-Friki [2011-10-28 19:22:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow I love!
The best part is when Hinata BEATS THE SHIT INTO Sakura o.O that was epic!!!

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uiowert7io34 In reply to Heavy-d-Friki [2011-10-28 19:45:14 +0000 UTC]

Actually she just yelled and barked at her but you cant help but to see that so sexy

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demongirls12 [2011-10-16 20:45:50 +0000 UTC]

lol this was awesome i love the part where Hinata explodes at Sakura great job

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uiowert7io34 In reply to demongirls12 [2011-10-16 20:47:43 +0000 UTC]

Thnx I also got part 4 out please read. oh and I also have my true look on my gallery

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narutoandhinata4life [2011-10-15 22:47:04 +0000 UTC]

Awesome as always some how I expected Hinata to beat the crap out of Sakura great man great!!

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uiowert7io34 In reply to narutoandhinata4life [2011-10-15 22:58:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I wanted to but that would be to much out of character for her especially since there about to go to battle

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narutoandhinata4life In reply to uiowert7io34 [2011-10-15 23:01:18 +0000 UTC]

yeah good point still it was awesome !!!

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uiowert7io34 In reply to narutoandhinata4life [2011-10-15 23:08:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much Hopefully I'll be done soon with my next one

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narutoandhinata4life In reply to uiowert7io34 [2011-10-15 23:14:28 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait

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uiowert7io34 In reply to narutoandhinata4life [2011-10-15 23:20:09 +0000 UTC]

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THE-Tazzy-Devil [2011-10-15 05:19:31 +0000 UTC]

love it!!^^

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uiowert7io34 In reply to THE-Tazzy-Devil [2011-10-15 10:53:34 +0000 UTC]

IM glad you enjoyed it

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Hardystyle [2011-10-15 03:15:16 +0000 UTC]

o.O i wonder if Zaya and Scarlet Blase(if that's her name) are sisters or are related

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Hardystyle In reply to Hardystyle [2011-10-15 03:15:31 +0000 UTC]

Also good chapter

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uiowert7io34 In reply to Hardystyle [2011-10-15 03:16:46 +0000 UTC]

thnx man and hey who knows till next chapter

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saberwolfgirl In reply to uiowert7io34 [2011-10-15 14:03:58 +0000 UTC]

you are snaekey bringing in scarlet, ohh now there gonna be a really big rumble... but dont worry i wont spoil the surpirse. tehe.

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uiowert7io34 In reply to saberwolfgirl [2011-10-15 15:08:04 +0000 UTC]

We'll see

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uiowert7io34 In reply to uiowert7io34 [2011-10-15 15:12:31 +0000 UTC]

and Im glad you enjoy the story so far and again thank you for letting me use your characters

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