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uiowert7io34 — J.I Naruto part 7
Published: 2011-10-20 02:00:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 517; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description {Last time on J.I. Naruto} Like I said before READ LIKE EVERYONE ONE ELSE! IM NOT GOING TO SPOON FEED ALL OF YOU. GO READ THE LAST CHAPTER SHEESH!!

Well on to the show

(Tsunade and Jiraya stares at the evil masterminds eyes as they can't believe what they are witnessing, when Tsunade asks Jiraya with a whisper) "Jiraya….how much time do we have left?" (Jiraya looks at his timer and says back to the blond women) "I'm afraid we only have 25 minutes to spare." (Orochimaru walks slowly to them half way as he says to them) "Oh come know it's pretty much my birthday….since I am now reborn as a Uchiha (makes his usual evil laugh) why don't we celebrate…WITH YOUR DEATH!!" (Orochimaru stares at them and makes a genjutsu around them and paralyze Tsunade as Jiraya gets out of range and uses a release jutsu on Tsunade and releases her from the jutsu)(Tsunade gets up little queasy and says to Jiraya) "Thank you, I'll be fine." (Jiraya holds Tsunade up and looks at Orochimaru as he keeps staring at them just hoping they would mess up and fight back as Jiraya asks Tsunade) "Lady Tsunade I will go to Sage mode but I need some time to gather some energy can you distract him for 1 minute?" (Tsunade got up and replied to him) "That will not be a problem!"

(Jiraya goes to position and clears his entire body with a clear mind as his body stats forming small similarities to a frog) (Jiraya walks up a few feet and said out loud)  "I may not be the commander of this mission……BUT YOU DAMN RIGHT BETTER REMEMBER THAT I AM THE HOKAGE OF THE VILLAGE YOU AND I ONCE GREW UP TOGETHER!!"(Tsunade drops all her guns and weaponry and makes a hand signs of a summoning and summons Katsuyu and breaks the room and falls out of the estate from the large slug size and making them fall but distant enough for Jiraya to stay in the room and not fall while Orochimaru predicted this and summoned Manda and landed on his head as Tsunade stopped Katsuyu on the remaining wall and climb up before entering the snakes perimeter as Tsunade yelled out loud) "JIRAYA ARE YOUF*** DONE YET."(Jiraya walked on the corner of the broken hall and said with a smile on his face while 2 familiar faces on his shoulder) "YEAH DONT WORRY TSUNADE WE ARE READY!!" (While Fukasake on Jiraya on his right side of his shoulder and Shima on his right Shima says to Jiraya with a surprise on her face)  "Hey Jiraya boy what's going on here, and why don't you ever summon us at a nice time like tea or even just to chat maybe?" (Jiraya seems baffled at her conversation when there so close at defeating Orochimaru when he says to her) "Not Know Madam sage we got bigger problems at this point."(Jiraya points at Orochimaru that was on his giant snake with his Mangakou sharingan still activated when the two sages said out loud) "Oh I see Jiraya boy, well don't worry we will assist you in defeating this moron and taking him down once and for all) (Jiraya has a slight smile on his face and says to them) "Thank you... (Looks at Orochimaru with determination"....Know then let's get down to business."

(Jiraya puts his hands down and says to Tsunade) "Tsunade get out of the way this is going to get really messy" (Tsunade gets out of range of Jiraya and watches him perform his warlord title as all the sages said out loud while Orochimaru looks at them with fatigue of their next move) "Sage Art: Goemon!!!" (Jiraya lets out a large amount of Oil and Fukasake lets out a long range of a wind style and Shima lets out a long range of fire making a large mass of boiling flood getting directly at Orochimaru as he just smiles as he bites his finger and falls to the ground and says out loud) "QUADRUPLE RASHOMON!!" (With the help of the mangakyou sharingan he was able to form a newer upgrade of the Rashomon with the one in front a red normal size as a normal Rashomon and the second green but 2x times bigger than the first the third blue but 5x times bigger than the second and the final one had all their colors in a swirling color and was 10x times bigger than all 3 together as it held off the oil spilling of Jiraya attack barely as the first one melted and the second melted as well and the oil split between the Rashomon and went passes Orochimaru when all of a sudden Tsunade had her chance and Used Katsuyu to use the Tongue tooth Sticky Acid jutsu and got Orochimaru off guard and had to jump out of the way the opening as Manda was hit and falls into the oil and disappears while Jiraya walls to the ground and a couple of feet away from him Jiraya, Shima and, Fukasaku said aloud to the white paled Orochimaru) "OROCHIMARU THIS IS YOUR END!!" (The two toad sage mouth was over laps as they said out load) "SAGE ART: DEMONIC ILLUSION .....TOAD CONFRONTATION CHANT JUTSU!!!!!!!" (mama and pa screeched at Orochimaru ears as Orochimaru eyes was goggling all over the place till his mind was mentally frozen and was inside of this box vortex as was being held by 4 giant warrior style sages when Jiraya approached him and said to him from the other side of the box) "Orochimaru......I'm glad you finally fulfilled your dream...I really hope if it was worth your life over.....life resurrection, controlling death.....controlling life....was it really worth it....and worse.....why would you mentally twist up a young boy such as Sasuke to do your bidding"(Orochimaru just smiles and closed his eyes when Jiraya pitied the man and said to him in a sad tone) "You....Orochimaru we where good friends when we were young.......and I'll hope we can be friends again...in the next life." (in the real world Jiraya summons a big white scratched up sword and attempts to stab Orochimaruu when suddenly OROCHIMARU EYES OPPENED AND A BLACK CLOUD POPPED OUT OF HIM AND JRIAYA HAD TO STEP BACK AS THE JUTSU WAS CANCELED)(Jiraya got up slitheringly as he was forming.......his own Susanoo ) "I'm not done I'm not....(Orochimaru groaned as his eyes and body was hurting at every cell as he was forming susanoo which had a head of a snake yet a body of Thor of godly stature) "I'm...(breaths deeply) I'm not donAAAAAAAAAA....(for some reason his experiment goes terribly wrong as his body was expanding inside of his own Susanoo and was being sucked inside of Susanoo and just exploded with Jiraya getting Tsunade out of the way with  Katsuyu blocking the explosion)

(Only moments later the explosion stopped and his entire remains where gone when Jiraya was holding onto Tsunade behind her back and said to her when Katsuyu got off of them) "It's a pity he died from his own greed of power." (Tsunade agreed as he looked at him and gotten close to her savior and kissed his lips for saving her)(When she broke the kiss and gotten up embarrassed Jiraya was stunned still in sage mode while getting up to say to her as the 2 sages started to giggle in the inside but didn't say anything) "Tsunade does this mean that......you actually like me?" (Tsunade turned to him and starts to say to the deformed sage mode Jiraya) "I really was embarrassed to say this but.....I lo" (All of a sudden a vortex of non other formed from where Orochimaru met his demise and a Gigantic white snake popped out that looked like Orochimaru with 2 snake double ended swords with a snake mouth covering his face like some kind of head gear and said to him) "I TOLD YOU I'M NOT DONE.......NOT EVEN CLOSE...NOT BY A LONG SHOT..I HAVE FINALLY REACHED THE OTHER SIDE OF THE GODS AND BECAME ONE OF THEM....I HAVE FUSED WITH SUSANOO ITSELF.... I FINALLY HAVE REACHED MY GOAL........ I AM NOW .......................EEEEVERYTHIIIIIIIING........I.......AM...... NOW

POWER!!!!!!!!!!!!

(As Orochimaru hair flutteres all over the placehe starts to pop out tremendous amount of chakra with the form of white snakes with toxins falling out of their and Orochimaru mouth)(Tsunade is gouging at this display of unsurpassable chakra as Tsunade holds on to Jiraya and says to him) "JIRAYA........WHAT ARE WE GOING TO DO!?!?!?!" (Jiraya thinks fast Fukusake says to Jiraya) "JIRAYA DO YOU PLAN ON USING THE TECHNIQUE NARUTO TAUGHT YOU HIMSELF"

(Jiraya eyes widen when he remembers a time when he was revived after the war and Naruto asked him)

*Flashback*

"Hey old man I want to teach you something that I learned on my own." (Jiraya laughs as he mockingly says to the blond ninja) "Oh and what is it you WANT TO TEACH ME?" (Naruto smiled at him and said with a grin with Naruto back turned) "Don't worry its super cool old man" (Jiraya laughed as he follows him) Alright then Naruto whatever you say."

*End of Flashback*

(Jiraya looks at Tsunade and kisses her as the pressure of Chakra pushes them and says to her) "TSUNADE I HAVE A PLAN, BUT I NEED YOU TO BE AT FULLPOWER AND USE YOUR ULTIMATE ATTACK IF WE ARE GOING TO WIN!!!"(Tsunade blushes as she nods and Agrees when she forms a hand sign and says out loud) "YIN SEAL RELEASE....FULL POWER TO ALL MUSCLE TRANFOR TO THE ARM JUTSU..... QUAKER STYLE!!!!!!!" (Jiraya looks at his hand as Fukasaka and Shima holds their hand out in a team display and helps him form a Rasengan then he holds it in the air as its gets bigger and bigger and bigger) (He starts swirling his hands around as he puts his index finger on the ball as he announces out) "THIS IS WHAT MY STUDENT....UZUMAKI NARUTO HAS TAUGHT ME OROCHIMARU........THE MAN WHO WILL BECOME TSUNADE REPLACEMENT SOMEDAY WHEN SHE STEPS DOWN AND BECOME THE HOKAGE..........THIS IS

/////////////////////////GIGANTO..........RASEN.....SHURIKEN!!!!!!!\\\\\\\\\\

(Orochimaru laughed at his display as he says to him) "You think you can stop me with that HAHAHAHA" (Orochimaru turns his hand into a snake and forms a purple and forms a Cannon) "WELL GUESS WHAT THIS IS MY ULTIMATE POWER... HYDRA SNAKE CANNON"(They all target at each other with a killing instinct to finish each other off as time is running out and everything will start to blow)
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Comments: 27

DaggerxNowkia [2011-10-28 00:45:28 +0000 UTC]

Very great. extremly epic. you should do the Nartuo Manga instead of the guy thats doing it right now.

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uiowert7io34 In reply to DaggerxNowkia [2011-10-28 00:50:02 +0000 UTC]

Wow you think........OH YEAH NARUHINA MOMENTS all over the place and extreme epic paportions.......AND O HHELL YES MADARA AND OH God Obito is really The man under the mask and kakashi Gets pissed off........so awesome......but alast I'm not the creator

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demongirls12 [2011-10-21 01:51:32 +0000 UTC]

omg this chapter was amazing!!! I loved the fight between Jiraya, Tsunade, and Orochimaru it was epic

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uiowert7io34 In reply to demongirls12 [2011-10-21 02:25:27 +0000 UTC]

YAY IM so glad you liked it and my newst one is up right know I just finished it!

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narutoandhinata4life [2011-10-20 20:22:49 +0000 UTC]

top quallty once again bro

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uiowert7io34 In reply to narutoandhinata4life [2011-10-20 23:07:51 +0000 UTC]

thank u so much

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narutoandhinata4life In reply to uiowert7io34 [2011-10-21 21:48:29 +0000 UTC]

np so how have u been bro

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uiowert7io34 In reply to narutoandhinata4life [2011-10-21 22:46:34 +0000 UTC]

Sucky day

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narutoandhinata4life In reply to uiowert7io34 [2011-10-21 23:29:18 +0000 UTC]

oh why?

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uiowert7io34 In reply to narutoandhinata4life [2011-10-21 23:46:50 +0000 UTC]

dont want to mention it. it just sucks

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narutoandhinata4life In reply to uiowert7io34 [2011-10-22 00:04:54 +0000 UTC]

okay that fine I just been watching one piece all day

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uiowert7io34 In reply to narutoandhinata4life [2011-10-22 00:09:52 +0000 UTC]

I told you Its epic didn't I. I feel bad for those who saids its emo

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narutoandhinata4life In reply to uiowert7io34 [2011-10-22 02:11:36 +0000 UTC]

yup u did bro ^_^

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uiowert7io34 In reply to narutoandhinata4life [2011-10-22 02:20:03 +0000 UTC]

(thumbs up)

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saberwolfgirl [2011-10-20 16:53:39 +0000 UTC]

wow now that might just be the best chapter yet, really good and a cliff hanger wow. now im curious. can't wait for the next chapter.

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uiowert7io34 In reply to saberwolfgirl [2011-10-20 17:56:40 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU SO MUCH I realy want to make sure Im on top of my game everytime I write.

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saberwolfgirl In reply to uiowert7io34 [2011-10-20 20:39:41 +0000 UTC]

well ou sertanly where writing this part of the story.

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uiowert7io34 In reply to saberwolfgirl [2011-10-21 00:17:04 +0000 UTC]

YEah I was

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Hardystyle [2011-10-20 02:22:10 +0000 UTC]

OMG THE ENDING WAS EPIC xD haha giganto rasen shuriken that thing must be super big

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uiowert7io34 In reply to Hardystyle [2011-10-20 02:32:55 +0000 UTC]

and besides Jiraya had to have help from fukasake and his wife to make it

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Hardystyle In reply to uiowert7io34 [2011-10-20 02:36:46 +0000 UTC]

since its giganto it must be 10x bigger and 10x stronger xD since giganto rasengan is incredibly bigger then rasengan

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uiowert7io34 In reply to Hardystyle [2011-10-20 02:45:38 +0000 UTC]

SO very true my friend..so very true. I wonder if someoen would take that as a request

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Hardystyle In reply to uiowert7io34 [2011-10-20 02:51:22 +0000 UTC]

who knows if your lucky yes

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uiowert7io34 In reply to Hardystyle [2011-10-20 02:54:43 +0000 UTC]

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uiowert7io34 In reply to Hardystyle [2011-10-20 02:29:18 +0000 UTC]

IT WAS and Im so glad you liek it man

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Hardystyle In reply to uiowert7io34 [2011-10-20 02:31:06 +0000 UTC]

xD

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uiowert7io34 In reply to Hardystyle [2011-10-20 02:31:50 +0000 UTC]

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