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uiowert7io34 — NaruHina Baggage part 4
Published: 2011-10-10 01:12:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1514; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 2
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Description (The spot lights start shining on Jiraya Sannin as the audience starts clapping with joy as Jiraya yells out to everyone with glee) "And we are back once again everyone on our final stretch on today's show." (The audience starts to sob and ahh). (Jiraya looks at the crowd and says to them) "Well don't worry we still get a little left on today's episode on baggage, and besides if you have trouble finding love or are in a relationship in a mix come over to our show and we will host ya live in Konoha" (The crowd goes crazy and claps for joy as they see Jiraya next to the new Love birds Naruto and Hinata) (Jiraya put his hands next to them and says to them) " Alright you guys each of you got one last baggage and you two need to decide if each of you can handle your baggage. Everyone understands" (Naruto and Hinata nods and simultaneously says to Jiraya, "Yes"). (Jiraya makes a grin with joy and moves his hands out energetically toward the woman with the two baggage's and tells her in a deep voice)  "Alright miss please open Hinatas' biggest baggage. (The woman opens the case on the right side of her and it reads inside) "MY COUSIN HAS ATTEMPTED TO RAPE ME MORE THEN 5 TIMES IN MY LIFE!!"

(Naruto looks stunned as Hinata looks down in shame of her cousin and remembers all the times he has done so) (Jiraya looks at Naruto and asks him with a serious voice) "Well Naruto can you take this baggage?" (Naruto looks at Hinata with full of confidence and says not to Jiraya but to Hinata) "I will make sure I will protect you even with my life against your incest cousin *Hugs Hinata* (Hinata starts to blush deeply and hugs him back and felt even more in love for him) (Jiraya looks at the last two paragraphs on his cards and looks at the women and says deeply) Alright everyone did you all figure out which one was Narutos' biggest baggage, "Is it be A. I have slept with Sasuke when we were younger', B. 'I have slept with every girl that I have saved after a mission', or is it, C. I have always dreamt of having a 4 way with Sasuke, Sakura and Hinata." Well then, we will figure it out right now. (The crowd goes crazy and claps for joy for the moment have finally come to see Narutos biggest baggage as Naruto felt insecure and uneasy because what was in there could ruin everything.) (Jiraya looks at Hinata and says) "Alright Hinata what's in this baggage is Narutos' biggest baggage and you must decide of you can handle this baggage….are you ready" (Hinata holds on to Narutos' arm tightly and saids aloud) "Yes I am ready, but I don't think it will really do much too how I feel for him!" (Jiraya looks at her with a smile and says) "Well tell me if you would be concern about any of the choices which one would it be that would make you feel the most concern." (Hinata looks puzzled but looks at Jiraya again and says) Well if anything B first then A, because if he saved every girl and then do things to them I'd be concern and then if he slept with Sasuke I'd be disappointed, But it would be C and he gives me a logical reason it wouldn't really phase me. (Jiraya looks at the women and tells her on a deep voice glancing at Naruto seeing him a little bit nervous but relaxed)

"Alright young miss please open the final baggage" (drums role has been set, everyone has been dyeing for this moment as they look at the women slowly opening the case as everyone been wishing she would open it faster from the suspense, As the women finally opened the case, It had a golden, glittering card folded inside, she took it out and reached it to Jiraya as there was even more suspense, As Jiraya unfolded the card he read inside of it saying as the drum role has made its final drum)" I HAVE DREAMT OF SLEEPING WITH SASUKE, SAKURA, AND HINATA" (The audience has clapped with joy as they finally gotten to know Naruto biggest baggage) (Jiraya looks at Hinata as he unfolds the card and returns it to the women and says to her) Well Hinata are you able to take this baggage?" (Hinata didn't wait for a second to kiss her beloved once again but then breaks it in a few seconds to ask one question) Naruto I'll take your baggage but I am curious what was your dream specifically about the four of us was anyway?" (Naruto looks sweaty but breaths deeply as he said to her) "Well the thing is that I thought of us in a four way with Sasuke with Sakura and Me with…..yo…(Hinata pulls his head in and kisses him relentlessly in adoration that he feels for her) (Jiraya went up to them and rudely broke the kiss) (Hinata looks mad at Jiraya and said sternly) "What's the big deal Jiraya!?" (Naruto also looks confused for as they listen to Jiraya) "Don't you guys remember you won the game…… which means, YOU WIN A FREE 5 WEEK VACATION!!!!"(Hinata feels stunned as she hugs Naruto and jumps up and down while holding him and so excited that she finally has Naruto to herself" (Naruto looks at Jiraya and asks him) "So where are we going anyway?" (Jiraya looks befuddled as he looks at the original prize then makes a huge smile and says with a laugh) "Well Naruto since we are low on budget from the chaos from the path of pains and from the war of all nations against Madara. We decided the best place for you which was cheap" (Naruto and Hinata looks confused as he bits his thumb and does a hand sign and says aloud) "SUMMONING JUTSU!" (he slams his hand to the ground as a giant frog pops out of nowhere and it swallows it Naruto and Hinata to another world) (Jiraya pats his hands together and say to the audience aloud) "WELL THAT'S OUR SHOW EVERYBODY SEE YOU NEXT TIME ON" (Jiraya swings his arms to the sky as the audience says aloud) "BAGGAGE!!!!!!"  (Everyone starts screaming wooing for joy as they finally see the conclusion of the show)

(Behind the scenes where Naruto and Hinata are) *Naruto and Hinata are falling from the sky seeing a beautiful grass land with frog statues everywhere and in the middle see a Giant Mountain waterfall and sees a house under them and falls in it), (Naruto and Hinata Gets up unharmed and stretches and see Mr. and Mrs. Toad sage and they say to the new love couple) "HELLO THERE WELCOME TO YOUR FREE 5 WEEKS VACATION" (Naruto and Hinata looks puzzled as they see them next to a buffet or grueling bugs and crawling worms and different kind of cuisine and starts to hurl from the disgusting food in front of them) (Naruto felt puckish as he say to them) "Uhh Granny toad sage please tell me we are not eating that" (Mr. and Mrs. Toad sage looks befuddled and looked at them both and laughed before saying) No Naruto-Chan this is not for you your treat is outside waiting for you. (She points outside and Naruto and Hinata Goes to where she points at and sees a giant wooden boat and sees Yamato in it and say to them as he waves to them) "HEY NARUTO HINATA YOU FINALLY MADE IT!!!" (Hinata was even more happy and surprised from seeing all the frogs bringing in delicious food and other catering stuff and sees so much beauty as the water was clear but had a green color from its purifying abilities in the water as Hinata says to her new love) "Oh Naruto I'm so happy that we can finally be together" (Naruto holds Hinata from her waist and says to her with a loving smile as his blue eyes was meeting with the blue hair purple eyed girl that he always thought was so beautiful it was like he was in a trance looking at them) Hinata I never told you this but when you told me that you loved me when you saved me from Pain….. I couldn't help but to think about you no matter what I did and when I went to train how to control the Kyuubi you where in my head supporting me the whole time…what I'm trying to say is that….well…..I….I hope I'm not rushing this but…..will you do me the honor of marrying me (Hinata looks stunned as he sees Yamato come up to them and present to her a beautiful diamond ring in it with it incrusted with both their names inside the ring) So umm Hinata (Putting the ring on her finger as Hinata starts to blush)….what….what do you sa….(Hinata kisses him passionately making them fall to the ground and said to him) Naruto you have no idea how many times I dreamt of you saying those words to me of coarse I'll marry you. (Naruto returns the kiss to her and hears the ship horn as it was time to go) (Hinata gets up and puts her hands out to him and saids) "Shall we go my new fiancée?" (Naruto reaches his hand out and follows her to the ship as they enjoy their time on the cruise)
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Comments: 20

greaper3000 [2014-04-28 03:52:12 +0000 UTC]

and the Day Naruto arrives back in Konoha with his new wife (the toad sages preformed the ceremony with Tsunade attending, Jiraya is dead, she killed him for the game show stunt) he walks up to Neji and...

I legally can't continue that sentence or I would go to jail for Possible War Crimes and breaking the Geneva treaties and forcing them to update it for some of the sick shit i cannot repeat.

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thadarova [2011-10-14 00:59:49 +0000 UTC]

now, thank you, really, you made me laugh so much and i was really depressed, now i feel happy n.n

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uiowert7io34 In reply to thadarova [2011-10-14 01:01:18 +0000 UTC]

Np Im glad to make your day extra special. I am making othe chapters aswell and if you want me to make a special baggage for your favorite coupel just liek the rules states I can make it for you

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thadarova In reply to uiowert7io34 [2011-10-14 09:35:02 +0000 UTC]

im thinking... has to be manga or anime? and can it be a webcomic? 8D

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uiowert7io34 In reply to thadarova [2011-10-14 12:14:33 +0000 UTC]

HAHha well it would be better but Im only a writer if someone good can assist me then I would be able to make my own doujin

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thadarova In reply to uiowert7io34 [2011-10-16 03:45:51 +0000 UTC]

ow... i'll think about it then!

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uiowert7io34 In reply to thadarova [2011-10-16 03:52:06 +0000 UTC]

think about what again friend

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thadarova In reply to uiowert7io34 [2011-10-16 04:17:08 +0000 UTC]

think about what manga/anime would be good for you to write a baggage thing

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uiowert7io34 In reply to thadarova [2011-10-16 04:20:24 +0000 UTC]

ahh cool please I was hoping someoen would eventually

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aracely-chan [2011-10-10 14:37:30 +0000 UTC]

So amazing !!! I love it ! yeah you should do the cruise that would be amazing too

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uiowert7io34 In reply to aracely-chan [2011-10-10 16:59:07 +0000 UTC]

That's 2 down! Thnx 4 the reply!

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demongirls12 [2011-10-10 02:10:21 +0000 UTC]

lol i love matts naruhina chronicles and i will practice as much as i can to someday be as good as you. i will definately think of a couple and send you a note

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uiowert7io34 In reply to demongirls12 [2011-10-10 02:18:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah and you reminded me of one rule I needed to put up your a life saver. Just read the rules and before you send them to me because Im very specific

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demongirls12 In reply to uiowert7io34 [2011-10-10 03:11:40 +0000 UTC]

kk i will ill b brainstormin

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uiowert7io34 In reply to demongirls12 [2011-10-10 03:16:16 +0000 UTC]

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uiowert7io34 In reply to demongirls12 [2011-10-10 02:12:53 +0000 UTC]

YAY I cant wait

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demongirls12 [2011-10-10 01:57:46 +0000 UTC]

u rock at writing i hope i can be as good as writer as you one day!!!

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uiowert7io34 In reply to demongirls12 [2011-10-10 02:00:33 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you it took years of practice and......(groans) COLLEGE. But the guy that inspired me to do this was Mattwilson83 and ThaDoctor17 They are really good but IM glad you like my stuff but remember if you have a certain couple you liek to see give me a note and not on the comment so theer wont be any spoilers

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demongirls12 [2011-10-10 01:50:33 +0000 UTC]

that was awesome i love the ending lol keep up the good work!!! and you should definately make a project for their cruise im sure it will be awesome

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uiowert7io34 In reply to demongirls12 [2011-10-10 01:51:53 +0000 UTC]

1 down and 14 more to go and thank you for reading it I love writing

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