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UmbreonAngel98 — Am I still pretty?
Published: 2011-05-05 23:52:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 114; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description I hate hacking in pokemon. It takes the point of playing away a bit to me. But when its not me hacking and for a female shiny eevee I can make an exception. I was getting it from a less than trustable friend of my twin siste's... Kyle. Now I hate Kyle but he offered to do it for a red gyrados that he wanted to hack with. I know he will try some crap but I got nothing to lose since I got 5 more in the pc. We started the trade. "Take good care of Blaze!" the text read. The game froze. Kyle turned his game off. "DAMMIT KYLE IF I DIDNT GET THAT EEVEE IM GONNA HIT U SO HARD YOUR GONNA BE IN THE HOSPITAL!!" I screamed. Kyle turned of the game trying to get both pokemon out of the trade. A common glitch he loved. I quickly turned my game on and went in. I had both the gyrados and the shiny eevee. "What the heck! You got both of them!" he sighed. "Cheaters never prosper kyle!" I mocked with a middle finger. I went home and turned the game back on. I looked at my new pokemon. The Eevee and gyrados looked odd.. i couldnt put my finger on it. I could mabey say loose... like they would just blow away. I put the Eevee in front of my party, admiring her beauty. I got on my bike and zoomed off but i was stopped by a loud eevee cry. "WHAT THE-" I yelled as I fell off my bed. I held my game and hit the forward button and the game screeched again. I stopped and checked my party. What i found terrified me. Eevee's pixles were half gone and flowing away , her mouth in a gapping scream. She looked so desprate. Gyradoes was worse, his face twisted in agony, his pixles the same but black and looked like they burned. Whats going on?! I walked to the pokemon center and turned off the volume to stop the screams. I talked to nurse Joy. "Welcome to the- OH MY YOUR POKEMON! GIVE THEM HERE!" she scurried off into that room. After what seemed like hours she returned. "We did our best but we couldnt save gyrados." the text read. She gave me my pokemon. "We hope to see you again!" she said like that didnt happen. Bitch. I looked eagrly at my party hoping to find them both back, that i was just imagining. I wasn't, I found Eevee covered in blood with a gyrados tail, no back legs, no ears but instead gyrados whiskers, and her smile frightened me. "HO-LEE-SHAT" I stuttered. Eevee apeared front of my party and stood infront of my player. I talked to her,she had a question mark and a text appeared. "Am i still pretty?" it gave yes or no option, I hit yes I knew not to insult something that scared me. "Eevee cuddled up to you!" I smiled at her sweetness. "Eevee wants to be in a competition!" yes or no again. I hit yes. I was flown to the competion hall. I entered. I walked up to the woman at the table. "Hello would you like to ent- WHAT IS THAT THING!?!" she screamed. The other people turned and a mix of vioces surronded me. "ITS A MONSTER! KILL IT! CHASE IT AWAY!" I ran out, but they followed, I used surf and got to a island where they couldnt reach me. I sighed with relife. Eevee turned to face me then she shoved me. I felt a sharp pain in my chest. "What the hell?" I whispered and rubbed my chest. "You said Eevee was pretty! Why did you lie Mommyy?! WHY DID U TELL ME A LIE!?" my speakers screeched. I covered my ears which bled. "You are pretty! You are! I wouldnt lie! " I cried out. "YOUR LYING!!! AM I JUST A FACE A MOTHER CANT EVEN LOVE TO YOU!? IS THAT IT MOMMY?!!" My speakers schreeched again. Battle music cried out. "Eevee attacked" text read. Eevee face was twisted in a evil grin that streched till it bled and a wicked laugh echoed. "EEVEE USED BITE!" I gasped and grabbed my left ear... it came off.. "EEVEE USED REVENGE!" the wind was knocked out of me and I felt my ribs break. "EEVEE USED BITE!" I felt skin fall off my face. I cried a little cause thats all but just for a moment.. my vision grew red. "I doont care what u look like Eevee i love you..." I whispered. "Eevee doesnt belive you! Eevee used curse!" eevee's health dropped to zero. "Eevee has died. Eevee will see you in hell Mommy" the game shut off. "I hate you Kyle" I muttered as I slipped into peacful death.
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Comments: 2

adamantine2 [2011-05-06 00:16:28 +0000 UTC]

Nice! This makes me want to write a horror pokemon story. Write more of these please

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UmbreonAngel98 In reply to adamantine2 [2011-05-06 01:01:39 +0000 UTC]

thxs it just hit me last night ill try to think of more.

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