scooby82101 [2012-02-19 16:02:10 +0000 UTC]
It's nice to see two different point of views from two very different girls. We get a insight into them; while seeing they're very close friends.
You kept Aki her strong though fragile self while mantaining her suspiscions of Yuusei. They're starting to become friends but they're not buddy buddy yet. As for Mikage, it's evident she cares about Jack but sees what he doesn't.
You're improving a lot, which is great. ^^
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