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VampElf27 — Empty Reassurances
Published: 2010-12-09 07:01:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Even the best laid plans......*sigh*
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I think we have all been there at some point or another. Great portrayal!
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Interesting...
I like how you've made the first part almost impersonal and all, and then the last part is fully personal, and so we can relate to you there, if that makes sense?
The ellipses is used to great effect and I like how this is quite suggestive as well.
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Yeah, this piece was mostly me venting my frustration/disappointment. I didn't give too much thought to the technical aspect of writing it but I'm glad you think it went over well. I always enjoy your comments.
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Nice to know I'm not alone on this one. ^^"
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Nope...not alone for sure.
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