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VampElf27 — SWS Challenge: Week 3
Published: 2011-01-23 04:27:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 580; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 2
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"Nate...?""It's nothing. Just a shadow."
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This is fantastic, more so because the 'implicit' (if you can call it that) word relates to the story as well. It's almost... I don't know. I just think it's profound in terms of how you've written and portrayed the concept here.
Great choice of words and phrasing. It flows wonderfully well and... yeah, pretty clever overall.
I mean, you use language that we use every day, whereas some pieces use language that aren't used, so I think it's a bonus to have it all fit in this sense.
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Thank you! I always look forward to your comments when I submit stories to the group; they're very thorough and I feel so appreciated.
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Just generally excellent work. The ninjas are even hiding in the words!
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Yup! They're sneaky like that. ^^
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Very good reason.
Well done. The dialogue driven six worders are always more interesting.
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I liked this, and then I figured out what your word was and liked it even more, haha. Awesome job with the prompt!
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Them silly ninjas. them be EEERRRYYYWHEAR
Very cool indeed XD
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