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Published: 2010-03-11 16:38:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 6296; Favourites: 65; Downloads: 66
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Still trying to power up.these are pencils for a promo add assignment, inks and colors soon. If it turns out good I'll use it for something.
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He's the forsaken son of the God of Metal and the never before heard of daughter of thor, who dies birthing him thus garnering the hatred of the gods for him.
he has lightning powers and super strength and durability, he is banished to earth and seeks revenge on the god's. thats pretty much the jist.
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Pretty good lines and clear to read, all I'd add, to power it up further, would be a big bold foreshortening with the spear-holding hand of the foreground character, as it is he looks weaker than he could have looked.
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I agree, thanks for the feedback!
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Very... Awesome looks like something i would read =o
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For pencil work this is amazingly done. Quite a lot of detail just to have to ink over. The perspective is fantastic in this piece and I can definitely feel the movement.
I think the only thing that could use a bit of tweaking in this, if anything at all, would be the axe. The edges of the axe look like they are definitely going to be cropped in the final version, even if you are doing a full bleed. Having the entire axe showing in the finished version may help preserve the depth of the drawing, but that is just my opinion.
Again this is a beautiful pencil work and one in which I hope survives to be a finished product.
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This is looking VERY good. Nice work on this. It's very detailed.
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And they battled with battle axes, and battle gear with battle helmets as it trained and stormed and the black Sabbath song Black Sabbath played in the background as the ash and blood rained down as the Glory and power of Ragnarok(not the video game, the bloody god battle thing) rained the end was near the end was near.
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Wow great detail! Love your shading and the movement of the characters!
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Wow, you drew this all by hand and inked it by hand? It looks great! You didn't use any motion lines, but you didn't need to. The composition of the picture displays it! The shading is simple, but five or more levels of contrast might be too much. Keep up the good work!
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