Comments: 58
nitinha56 [2011-03-04 23:40:54 +0000 UTC]
I wanted to ask if you could send the original chapter to my email, nitinha_56@live.com.pt I love the story.
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judygrass [2010-01-31 21:31:32 +0000 UTC]
Could you please send me the original version at judy.grass@gmail.com?
I love these by the way!....i am astounded as to how you even got the idea of far far into the future with the inuyasha team....lovvving it
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yaoisnakezombie [2006-12-05 02:23:42 +0000 UTC]
Um... maybe this is just my computor, but I dont see the actual chapter... just the pic, which I cant really see anyway because of the "mauture content filter". xP So.... do you know what the problem is? I love the story so far, and I don't know what I'll do if I have to skip this chapter. ;.;
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ToDifferentToBeReal [2006-06-20 19:18:39 +0000 UTC]
I love the story. I can't wait for the next chapter. It's really really interesting.
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sehwabutterfly [2006-06-14 01:24:17 +0000 UTC]
......Horrifying.... Poor IY14... I could never handle that....
U__U It makes me happy Rin's there, though...
Picture? ^___^ I'd love to draw that scene! I'll do one for you ASAP! It'd be really cool if lots of people drew that scene, too, to see how different people envision it. ^____^ Keep up the great work!
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Michie123 [2006-06-13 03:32:22 +0000 UTC]
Awsome!!!! I need the next fix (chapters)
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Asarieth In reply to VegaSailor [2006-06-14 01:13:56 +0000 UTC]
Yay! ^^ can't wait!
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Phoenixchath In reply to VegaSailor [2006-06-17 13:20:26 +0000 UTC]
Sweet! Thanks. E-mail addy is trancelurai@gmail.com
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Caitriona695 [2006-06-12 22:49:51 +0000 UTC]
Fabulous chapter! I have to agree with another commenter though, this version is technically better than the other. I like the hentai of the other, but this one fits into the perceived storyline better.
Minor edit: "he did not here the eerie hollow thud" should be "He did not hear the eerie hollow thud."
Both chapters are good though. Thanks for sharing with us.
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Empatheia [2006-06-12 22:08:28 +0000 UTC]
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHOMGOMGPOORIY14
Ahem. That is all.
FUCK I LOVE THIS CHAPTERSOGOOSOGOODSOGOOD
Ahem. I said that's all *glares menacingly at... erm, vocal chords*
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Wynterstoops [2006-06-12 07:46:53 +0000 UTC]
Hmm...so you revamped it a did a repost. I approve!
I like this chapter a lot better than the original one, it suits the story a lot better.
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Wynterstoops In reply to Wynterstoops [2006-06-13 01:18:20 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
The original version was depressing...
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Caresse-par-la-lumie [2006-06-12 06:29:44 +0000 UTC]
awe, I can't read the link to the original version. *pout*
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