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Published: 2009-11-26 20:49:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 1605; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 49
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Description
Program: Corel Paint Shop Pro X2Take 2
I'm a newbie at this 
Stock:
- sky [link]
- paper [link]
- vintage lady [link]
- girl [link]
- bokeh [link]
- camera [link]
- alarm clock [link]
Feedback:
Do you like the composition of the picture? What do you like/dislike about the picture? Do you like the idea? How do you feel about the "Vintage" text on the left? Is it unnecessary or does it complete the pic? Related content
Comments: 46
I`ve featured this in my latest journal [link]
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oh, cool. I really like your stock btw
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This caught my eye! I really like collage-y kind of pieces. I think everything works in this picture except for the girl. (Not placement-wise, her clothes are just too modern and she doesn't really fit.) If you had gotten a different picture it would've worked better. I love the sky and the bubble-things, though. 
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thank you so much for your comment
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It's an interesting concept. There's a lot going on so it is a bit confusing.
I don't think I like the girl in the middle. She doesn't really fit with the "vintage" theme. The same thing with the camera. I think left side of this piece is vintage enough. I really like the background.
I didn't notice the word until you pointed it out. Maybe you could have it horizontal instead of vertical or maybe a darker color.
Hope this helps!
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thank you, yeah it helps
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i love the concept of your art (well..i always love anything vintage)though you could have put more to fill in some spaces at your canvas..and the "vintage"..urhhmm..its nice that you put it there to add touches but i would suggest that you pick an even more vintage-ey font rather than something rough-looking...but generally i love it
keep it up
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I think the girl in the middle doesn't fit the rest of the piece. She looks a little too modern to correspond with this and rather than going with the flow of the artsy, vintage background she seems to be going against it. X3
However, I do love how the background vintage pictures fit together 
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The colours and composition are good! You have a natural eye, it seems, for the feel of the image, but it is kind of apparent that you're new to this, mainly because of the cropping of the girl in the centre is very rough. Try smoothing out the edges somehow. And the camera would look a lot better if you lightened slightly, I think, if you can achieve that without affecting the rest of the image. But you've definitely done a good job on the rest of the colours.
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Thank you for your comment
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samo da je devojka u sredini bolje ublendovana bila bi za 10
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hehehe. bit ฤe bolje drugi out. joลก se uhodavam
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Nice overall work i would say but i would blend the girl a little bit so it fits with the rest, but i would give it a 7.5/10, you did a great job
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A very interesting concept I like it muchly. The only thing I would work on is blending the young girl at the front better with the rest of the image.
Right now she looks like she is just sitting on top and not part of the image behind her.
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thank you for the comment
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; It is amazing...But did you crop the picture? I'd love if the picture be square...
; The girl.. 
; VERY MUCH! i couldn't think of somthing like this to be honest..
; It is unnecessary I think, but it doesnt do anything distracting
Overall, LOVELY
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Hmmm... It's a nice picture, but a couple things seem unnecessary. The red rectangle on the lady's face is one. I don't mind the text, it doesn't stick out like a sore thumb or anything, and brings a bit of a theme to your piece. The girl in the front seems a little off from the picture. She feels like she's in a different picture, but other than that, it's nice!
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I'm really not sure how the girl in the front comes into play with the "vintage" theme, I mean, it looks to me like that's a fairly recent style she's wearing and it's in color as well...So I guess I'm just not really seeing the point of having her in there like that...other than that, I do like the rest of the comp, it's laid out pretty well, though I don't really think you need the word vintage over on the left like that either, it kills a little of the negative space you had going there and almost makes it feel cluttered. I do like the way the clock is more of just a shape rather than an actual thing, it leaves a little to the imagination as well as the way you've masked(I presume that's a mask anyway) the image of the tree under it pulls it together really nicely, almost as though the tree were the hands of the clock face.
Overall, I like it, it's mainly that girl in the front that is bugging me
Hope this helped somewhat!
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it helped a lot thank you
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lol...um um um...that word...ummm, oh ya
COLLAGE! (sp?)lol love it
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This is really cool, glad to see you learning the ropes. 
My only criticism is that some of the objects seem very awkwardly cut, you just need to work on making them smoother. However, the way the different layers interact is awesome! 
I think you should darken the midtone of the girl.
My favourite part is the butterfly.
The camera really speaks "vintage" and I love the style of the alarm clock and then the tree inside. 
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I don't like the girl in the center, she wasn't crop very well, and the light of the photo don't fit with the rest of composition. So is unecessary and make the work bad.
I like the "vintage lady" and whole texture, but i don't think that font is "vintage", maybe if you change it will look better ^^
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I know I messed her hair up and she is too bright for the picture.thank you for the comment
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to be honest i didn't notice the word "vintage" until i read the comment so i think it's slightly unessesary
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no problem, just giving some advice!
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