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bltterssweet [2017-06-20 05:20:55 +0000 UTC]
I actually like this a lot, I think it's better than my half-assed looking one, but I hope you accept friendly criticism because!! The one thing in this that bothers me is that you used the airbrush tool ;0; it kind of ruins the aesthetic of it,, I suggest blocking in shading and blurring, and not blurring every part of it and having some solid edges. Also some of the lighting is out of place, and it's a bit too strong as well. Try mapping where the light source is going to come from?? And avoid putting lighting and shading next to each other?? I don't know, that's my opinion but everything else is nice, except the design is flipped lol, but that's fine because it doesn't ruin it. You don't have to take my tips, these aren't meant to be hurtful, they are meant to help!! I really like your art yo ;/
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venomousfusion In reply to bltterssweet [2017-06-20 05:32:26 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thanks~ but I liked yours too, it was really cute
You know, I'd say that I didn't use the airbrush tool once here but I used gaussian blur to soften the shading and lighting, and it technically gives the same affect (it's just that recently, I like layering the shit out of everything XD). I'll try to tone it down a bit in the future though~
And the lighting is coming from...GOD. Jk, Idk, I put the lighting everywhere and then put it in a dark setting. I know, I messed up with the lighting .-. I'll try planning everything out before during the sketch stageΒ
yes, I know the design is flipped XD I mirrored it while I was doing the lineart/coloring and the piece of shit flipped back when I saved the final design
Anyways, it'll take a lot more than that to hurt my feelings (trying yelling and calling me profanities for that effect) I really appreciate criticism, it might take a while for me to solidly import them into my art cuz I'm dum, but it was really helpful~
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venomousfusion In reply to Oi27 [2017-06-19 22:38:13 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thanks~!
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TheMagicalFailWhale [2017-06-18 22:28:08 +0000 UTC]
It's a cup with dirt in it
I call it cup of dirt
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GingerSoft [2017-06-18 21:23:22 +0000 UTC]
DUde
This is the best I've seen so far
Like holy-
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venomousfusion In reply to GingerSoft [2017-06-18 21:46:17 +0000 UTC]
Oh, dankyuu~
I realized just now though that the whole thing mirrored .-.
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