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Neo-Kieran [2008-06-05 01:48:56 +0000 UTC]
Very good. But some things of spelling to pass by. In the first paragraph, I didnt know if you meant to do this but maik says "This my World" Didnt know if you wanted this is my world or not so yeah. second in the 6th paragraph you said Maik though hed check out the new shop. didnt know if you wanted it to be thought. But it was good just thought Id help with spelling like I always try to do.
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veXchu In reply to Neo-Kieran [2008-06-06 00:06:42 +0000 UTC]
Ah.
Thanks.
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Pirate-King-Jing [2008-06-01 21:45:33 +0000 UTC]
This si good, but my one downside is that live action thing you made, now i imagine master chief everytime i read a line of the white cloaked man's.
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veXchu In reply to Pirate-King-Jing [2008-06-02 00:13:52 +0000 UTC]
A joke was your downside?
>.>
Well, thanks.
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Pirate-King-Jing In reply to veXchu [2008-06-02 19:12:08 +0000 UTC]
Yes, which is very good, because you purposely made that joke
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veXchu In reply to Pirate-King-Jing [2008-06-02 19:28:30 +0000 UTC]
-_- I was joking in the last message.
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veXchu In reply to Pirate-King-Jing [2008-06-03 19:48:59 +0000 UTC]
O..kay..
Then how can a joke be a downside?
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Pirate-King-Jing In reply to veXchu [2008-06-04 00:06:10 +0000 UTC]
HMMMMMMMMM...... i do not know, in fact, that whole thing was SHOOSHAMMERY!
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