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ViralJP ā€” Discord's Revenge 9

Published: 2012-06-18 05:13:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 64913; Favourites: 1094; Downloads: 1000
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Description Apple Bloom (c) Hasbro
Sweetie Belle (c) Hasbro
Scootaloo (c) Hasbro
Cheerilee (c) Hasbro
Zecora (c) Hasbro
Big Macintosh (c) Hasbro
Granny Smith (c) Hasbro
Mrs. Smarty Pants (c) Hasbro
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (c) Hasbro
(c)

During Twilight, Fluttershy, and Pinkie Pie's pursuit of finding their friends, the Cutie Mark Crusaders were making their attempts in fixing the whole age mess that Discord caused in Equestria. Their best bet was to go and see Zecora, so they embarked to the Everfree Forest in the hopes of meeting with her. To their surprise, the forest still remained in tact, most of it at least.

Apple Bloom: C'mon crusaders. We're almost there, I think.
Scootaloo: You said that five minutes ago.
Sweetie Belle: *carrying Cheerilee* I just hope that Zecora isn't a small foal either, or we'll have to look after two babies.
Apple Bloom: Look girls! *sees Zecora's home in sight*
Scootaloo: Finally, we're here.
Apple Bloom: *runs to the door and knocks* Zecora, are you there? *knocks again* Zecora?

The door opens and the crusaders are about to greet their friend, but instead somepony else answers. The pony that greets them is a green pony with a somewhat familiar hair style and bonnet.

???: Hello there.
Apple Bloom: Um... Hi, I was wonderin' if Zecora happens to be home right now.
???: You mean that nice lil' Zebra friend? She's home alright.
Sweetie Belle: Did you say little?
???: Sure did. Why don't y'all come and make yourselves at home.
Scootaloo: Thanks.
???: Aww, what a cute foal ya got there. Is she your lil' sister or somethin'?
Sweetie Belle: Uh... yeah. Her name's Cheerilee. Say hi Cheerilee.
Cheerilee: *looks at the mysterious green pony* Baba.
Sweetie Belle: She's still too young to start talking yet.
???: Hi to you too lil' filly.

The ponies go inside and notice a young foal playing with an all too familiar doll. Also, they saw their friend Zecora, but noticed that she too had undergone a change in age much like the mane six.

Zecora: Hello there fellow fillies, what brings you to my ocassion of festivities?
Apple Bloom: Zecora? Is that really you?
Zecora: Indeed, there is no other one but me? And who may I ask is the name of thee?
Apple Bloom: It's me Apple Bloom!
Sweetie Belle: And I'm Sweetie Belle.
Cheerilee: *crying*
Sweetie Belle: Oh no! Don't cry Cheerilee.
Scootaloo: I'm Scootaloo. *walks over to the cauldron with Zecora*
Apple Bloom: Ya don't remember us at all?
Zecora: I'm afraid not. Forgive me for not being the hope that you saught.

Apple Bloom walks away with disappointment and decides to talk with the mysterious green pony who is tending to the foal beside her.

???: Doin' alright?
Apple Bloom: *sigh* No.
???: Sorry to hear that.
Apple Bloom: ... How did you two come across Zecora?
???: Well, this lil' colt and I were at this farm all by ourselves while a bunch crazy stuff was goin' about. This lil' guy was chewing away at this here doll. I couldn't leave him, so I took him with me to see if I can find help. We got lost in the forest for a while, but then Zecora found us and let the two of us take refuge.
Apple Bloom: Wait a sec, you said a farm. Did that farm have a lot of apple trees?
???: That's right.
Apple Bloom: And this lil' foal here was at the farm too?*takes a closer look*
???: Yup.
????(red foal): *chewing on the doll*
Apple Bloom: It can't be! *notices who the foal resembles* Big Macintosh!?
Big Macintosh: *still chewing*
Apple Bloom: Then that means *looks back at the green pony* GRANNY!
Granny Smith: What!? Are you blind or somethin'? I'm no granny.
Apple Bloom: *heads back to Zecora* We've gotta make some kind of potion or what not that'll turn everypony back.
Scootaloo: But how, I don't think Zecora even remembers that stuff.
Apple Bloom: Hey Zecora, do you know anything about making an age potion?
Zecora: I can't say that I do, but how about instead I whip up a nice and tasty stew?
Scootaloo: I guess we're on our own then.
Apple Bloom: Looks like we'll have to make our own potion then.
Sweetie Belle: Uh, a little help you two. *trying to calm a crying Cheerilee*

With greater problems against them, the crusaders are on their own in creating a potion that will help remedy everypony's predicament.
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Coolestkitty [2021-03-29 12:28:31 +0000 UTC]

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FluttershyLove5 [2012-06-18 20:01:12 +0000 UTC]

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Amazing story! I want this to be a legit episode! I love the way you drew filly granny smith, it reminds me of a page I saw on facebook! The though of having an age swap and how scared and frustrated the cutie mark crusaders would be a hilarious episode for season 3! The vibrate colours make the picture a delisious visual for the well written detailed piece below. Brvo for making such a great story and even better picture, plaese continue making these! They are truely FANTASTIC I cant wait to read some of your others e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Move over ponyville theres a new Lauren Faust in town!!!!!

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ViralJP In reply to FluttershyLove5 [2012-06-18 20:14:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch for the critique. I wouldn't go as far to say that it's Lauren Faust material, but I do appreciate the thought nonetheless.

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FluttershyLove5 In reply to ViralJP [2012-06-20 20:07:31 +0000 UTC]

Lol

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ComradeDerpy [2012-06-18 06:49:49 +0000 UTC]

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Filly Zecora! Completely original, I have never seen that before x) although that could just be me. Zecora's room has that "isolated, used" feel not unlike the show, and the facial expressions... where can I begin? Hilarious, especially Apple Bloom's! The story has great continuation, as it retains that suspenseful tone to it, although "in tact" should be "intact" (sorry, personal grammar OCD). Bringing back Big Mac's doll (argh, forgot the name) is a great way to keep with the show as well. Overall, the piece is great, my only real complaint is Sweetie Belle's horn - it just seems a bit too... sharp. But besides that, another wonderful work.

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MasekKluson [2017-03-06 22:08:18 +0000 UTC]

for Discord's Revenge 12, Spike tried to get the hourglass from Discord, but it caused him to become a teenage winged dragon.

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alexwarlorn [2017-01-01 22:10:20 +0000 UTC]

Can Zebra still speak Equestrian at that age, or just Swahili?Ā 

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alexwarlorn [2014-11-11 09:19:26 +0000 UTC]

Filly Zecora is so cute.Ā 

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snakeofdeath1 [2014-09-30 05:14:41 +0000 UTC]

Well that's a problem

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boogerejean [2014-01-07 00:01:09 +0000 UTC]

Sombra may have been resurrected because of Discord, but fortunately, he was resurrected at the point BEFORE he discovered the Forbidden Archives.

He might even attempt to help, provided they help him find his friend, Princess Luna!


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Let's do the Time Warp again!!!



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alexwarlorn [2013-10-17 02:38:38 +0000 UTC]

Foal Twilight, "GIVE ME BACK SMARTY PANTS!"Ā 

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Elizian789 [2013-08-28 05:15:10 +0000 UTC]

Wasn't granny Smith Platinum Blonde

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Silverumbreon101 [2013-08-25 11:13:42 +0000 UTC]

lol big macintosh baby XD

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Gihja638 In reply to Silverumbreon101 [2013-09-07 19:40:10 +0000 UTC]

*little macintosh

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TigerSiil [2013-07-05 20:39:23 +0000 UTC]

cutie mark crusaders could be than in bigger size

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Thekidwithatisum [2013-06-11 01:50:26 +0000 UTC]

THAT'S GRANNY SMITH AS A FILLY!!!!

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Cheesy-Sapphy [2013-04-11 23:03:16 +0000 UTC]

Big Mac isn't so big any more.

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bronybyexception [2013-03-03 02:04:28 +0000 UTC]

Didn't have time to read the fic I'll read it tomorrow, awesome pic though

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Bluestar3445 [2013-02-24 20:24:40 +0000 UTC]

When is 10 coming out!? I want it now!!!!!!!!!! I love this so much!

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alexwarlorn [2013-01-25 10:30:44 +0000 UTC]

Look on the right side. At least they aren't being nasty to each other like the last time Discord broke out.

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1Elementofhope [2013-01-21 17:22:37 +0000 UTC]

Granmars should go back to being younge

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hansemist [2012-11-23 21:32:02 +0000 UTC]

Topsy(from Tom and Jerry): IT'S NOT POSSIBLE!?!?!?

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LTblackcoat [2012-11-06 14:22:11 +0000 UTC]

personly i love the look of glee on Zecora.

i whould recomend for futher study "grannys" mane bands as they seem surpriseingly underdelevoped in comparasion to the rest of the pisce.

a quick sugestion of mine for this is, avoid strait lines (the hair whould not likely cause these) as it is truely very rare to find strait lines in nature and to have some hair a layer up from it covering it slightly so it blends in, if however it is a bead then i recomend some light reflectsion very simuler to same seen on the eyes.

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Khialat [2012-11-05 18:31:22 +0000 UTC]

Granny Smith!!!

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Isabelle-fox [2012-10-27 16:08:32 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if I said this already or not, but I love the expressions in this one, and little Zecora is so cute!

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Arthuurs [2012-10-20 21:47:31 +0000 UTC]

everyponys again haha yes!!

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CatLoverVick [2012-10-18 09:12:35 +0000 UTC]

Big macintosh isnt big anymore.

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TomFraggle [2012-10-16 02:53:03 +0000 UTC]

Cool idea. Looks great! Well done!

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Browntown747 [2012-10-06 16:57:01 +0000 UTC]

snivy [Nicely done]

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Strawberiies18 [2012-10-05 00:40:37 +0000 UTC]

Awwww Big mac and Cheerilee are adorable~~!! Granny Smith and Zecora are also super cute ^^

Ahaha awesome pic, i can actually imagine it happening xD

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baggo [2012-10-03 11:44:41 +0000 UTC]

this needs to happen.

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Tongi2002 [2012-09-26 19:50:09 +0000 UTC]

cutee~

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LadyKraken [2012-09-18 12:56:07 +0000 UTC]

I featured you here: [link]
Good job!

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Pikazilla1956 [2012-09-03 13:19:09 +0000 UTC]

this episode must be made!

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KidSapiens [2012-09-01 04:59:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh sweet Celestia, the paradoxes.

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MewMewCinnamon [2012-08-30 01:18:22 +0000 UTC]

I had a nose bleed when I saw little baby Big Macintosh.


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MoThEr FuCkIn MiRiClEs EvErYwHeRe!

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DarkroseConnery99 [2012-08-28 01:46:37 +0000 UTC]

omnomnom!!!

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Carrie-Kube [2012-08-26 00:48:08 +0000 UTC]

I could so see this happening on the show.

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Jdueler11 [2012-08-17 22:06:52 +0000 UTC]

Maybe they'll let Big Mac and Cheerilee.

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Jdueler11 In reply to Jdueler11 [2012-08-17 22:07:32 +0000 UTC]

...Big Mac "play with" Cheerilee. my bad

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AprilDiamond2001 [2012-08-17 18:31:19 +0000 UTC]

Haha! So funny!

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The-Lonely-Shepherd [2012-08-06 11:22:55 +0000 UTC]

I really try not to ask plot related questions, but please, are Pumpkin Cake and/or Carrot Cake effected by Discord's mischief, and will they play any role in the story, because I'm finding it most alluring.

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ViralJP In reply to The-Lonely-Shepherd [2012-08-06 16:06:04 +0000 UTC]

The two are affected by Discord's time chaos much like the others, but it's likely occurring offscreen. Sadly, it won't be playing any part in the story, though they might be shown in one of the later parts.

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The-Lonely-Shepherd In reply to ViralJP [2012-08-07 03:55:03 +0000 UTC]

That's unfortunate. Oh well, better luck for them next time, I guess.

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Jdueler11 [2012-08-05 07:48:38 +0000 UTC]

What is wrong with deviant artists? You don't just tell a thrilling story and leave it hanging like that.

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tazzz555 [2012-07-26 02:18:05 +0000 UTC]

I know very little of MLPFISM but I am really enjoying this. When will 10 come?

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RandomThingsILike [2012-07-16 13:49:05 +0000 UTC]

D'aaawwwww Baby Macintosh X3

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ProfessorFaceass [2012-07-15 22:16:53 +0000 UTC]

I'd love to see the Dragons from "Dragon Quest" caught by Discord, especially Garble...

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DarthWill3 [2012-07-01 19:57:11 +0000 UTC]

That's very cute!

Granny Smith is young again!

Oh, that Big Mac and Miss Smarty Pants!

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ViralJP In reply to DarthWill3 [2012-07-02 00:46:46 +0000 UTC]

I wonder if Twilight misses Smarty Pants.

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