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Description Ew
Kar's mouth
Ew.
and OMC THEY LOOK SO WEIRD
KARKAT IS ROYALTY
KANAYA STOP
YOU'RE SCARING ME
ERIDAN?!
IS THAT YOU?!
EQUIUS HAS HIS HORN BACK?!?
TEREZI CAN SEE?!?!
TAVROS IS A FUCKING CLOWN MURDERER?!?!?

okay that last thing no.
BUT WTF
I LOVE THIS
also Capekat, Eridead and Teresee.
You can kill me now -u-

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Guys can you do me a huge favor and critique my art
I really want to find a way to improve and ever since I got a premium membership, I have the ability tho knowwhat you guys think
It isn't mandatory but I'd deeply appreciate it!
Thanks~! ;D
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Blooming-Galaxy [2015-05-31 03:39:53 +0000 UTC]

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well, there are quite a few cliches. not all teal bloods are blind, and kanaya's love for fashion probably wouldn't change. I would also suggest leaving Terezi blind, but it could be from something different than the sun. Also, making dead redbloods are a very common cliche, I suggest not to make Eridan dead. I would also assume he and Equius and Eridan being ashamed of their blood colors, as they both are firm believers in the hemospectum. lastly, I would suggest ditching Equius's vision twofold and giving him different powers, as duality and the number 2 are a Captor thing. On a positive note, I would leave Tavros a subbjugulator, as long as he isn't addicted to sopor and a Gamzee clone. Also, I find it nice that you didn't make Karkat be all "i'm so )(appy glub glub!" If you want further advice, on my page I have a whole guide on making a good bloodswap.

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vocaloidCyborg In reply to Blooming-Galaxy [2015-05-31 04:11:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for critiquing!

As for pointing out the blood color flaws, I know that all teal bloods aren't blind. I just wanted it to seem more obvious. But I will improve on this. These are basically rough drafts of future versions of bloodswapped trolls

Eridan and Equius being ashamed for their blood color was actually my intention XD

I guess Eridan being dead could result in a major issue. I'll bring him to life.
congratulations Eri. Your not sawed in half.

Terezi being blind: I think when you said that she'dbe blinded by something otger than the sun" would be a reference to Jade bloods being immune to sunlight. But what other was could she be blinded?

Wait you mean to tell me tgat yellow bloods don't ALWAYS HAVE PSIONICS?! Well shit. You learn something new everyday.

I'm still trying to keep them in character.

Could you give me advice on the other trolls?
The bloodswap is basically the hemospectrum reversed (and candy bloods being refered to as the lowest.)

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Blooming-Galaxy In reply to vocaloidCyborg [2015-05-31 16:56:12 +0000 UTC]

i have a huge guide for building a better bloodswap but I will give you some Ideas.

FEFERI: I'd picture her like the signless\sufferer and her very anti hemospectum (maybe have her symbol be red, but that's up tp you)
ERIDAN: Probably would be violent for a lowblood, maybe disliking himself and other lowbloods
GAMZEE: Could be a hippie, maybe using sopor
EQUIUS: Lives near the city junkyard and builds robots out of scrap metal
VRISKA: Not as mean, but still likes to pick on other trolls DO NOT MAKE HER A CAT OBSESSED SHIPPER!!
TEREZI: Since jadebloods can survive the sun, maybe she could be blinded by a FLAARP incident
KANAYA: Has an even nicer hive due to slighly more money, still loves fashion, and likes to take long walks in the forest
NEPETA: A more aggressive hunter, but still nice and cute. Her huge hive could be covered in ships. PLEASE, NO VISION 8 FOLD THAT IS VRISKA'S THING
SOLLUX: I would still give him red\blue glasses. I would picture him even better with technology. He does not have to be STRONG
TAVROS: Was born into the subjuggulator cult, but is intimidated by other members of the cult.
ARADIA: Likes exploring undersea ruins\shipwrecks, still good friends with sollux. Can be dead if you want
KARKAT: So there are two ideas here.
A: He is hemo-annon because he dosen't want the attention
B: He likes being a leader of sorts, but isn't the best.

Also, about the yellow blood comment: Although unlikely, yellowbloods don't always have psychics. But what I meant is give Equius a different psychic power, as vision twofold is a captor thing.

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vocaloidCyborg In reply to Blooming-Galaxy [2015-05-31 20:04:22 +0000 UTC]

Questions though:
-Do olive bloods have do have cat faces even when not obsessed with cats?
-Do all rust loods have powers like basic telekinetics or summoning the dead?
-If I want Bloodswap!Equius to have psionics,Β then do both his eyes need to be one color and not the usual troll eyes?
-Cerulean bloods have mind control/reading abilities, right?
-Hemo-anon means he'd still hide his blood color? I'm confused.

Out of the question but Im curious:
If no other fuchsia blood is alive (I believe it's possible since they're more rare than the jade bloods, despite being harder to kill), Can a violet bloodΒ take over as ruler of alternia/beforus/ whatever-the-planet's-name-be?

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Blooming-Galaxy In reply to vocaloidCyborg [2015-05-31 20:22:25 +0000 UTC]

1. No
2. Trolls can have many different psychics.
3. No, that is purely aesthetic, but you can if you want.
4. Only a select few, and that doesn't mean vision 8fold, that is only for Vriska.
5. Yes, if you think he wouldn't want the attention, but that's my idea.
For the other question

I don't know, but it could be possible.

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vocaloidCyborg In reply to Blooming-Galaxy [2015-05-31 20:49:31 +0000 UTC]

a few more if you don't mind:
-Only jade bloods have the ability to go rainbow drinker, correct?
-Wouldn't Eridan WANT to die then? Lke Demara but for being ashamed such?
-Eridan wouldn't be a hipster, right? Imean, he'd have his personality but he wouldn't DRESS like one, would he?
-Wouldn't Feferi be KILLED if she was expressing her blood color?
-Would Equius still have his STRENGTH?
-WAIT DOES THIS MEAN THAT THE TROLLS WOULD DIE DIFFERENTLY?! They have their personalities (but slightly altered) BUT VRISKA KILLED AND BLINDED WITH HER POWERS. SHE'D HAVE TO DO A LOT OF PHISICAL WORK AND MANIPULATING (verbally) TO PULL THAT OFF AGAIN, WOULDN'T SHE? OR WOULD IT BE NEPETA?! AND WHAT ABOUT ERIDAN?! GAMZEE?! WHO'D BE MOST LIKELY TO KILL THEN IF TAVROS HAS A BLOOD COLORΒ KNOWN FOR THEIR MURDEROUS TENDANCIES?Β (I tend to find the death scenes more interesting, honestly. I don't know why)

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Blooming-Galaxy In reply to vocaloidCyborg [2015-06-01 00:01:12 +0000 UTC]

1-yes.
2-probably. If you want, you can make him dead, just give a reason.
3-it is just an idea, but keep in mind, the emperor is the signless.
4-yeah, but maybe not naturally
5-that is your decision. I would't make gamzee nor tavros go on a rampage. I think sollux would be the one to ko Eridan, because he is a higher blood.

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Blooming-Galaxy In reply to Blooming-Galaxy [2015-06-01 00:04:07 +0000 UTC]

by probably, I mean Eridan would still be a hipster.

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Blooming-Galaxy In reply to Blooming-Galaxy [2015-05-31 20:24:59 +0000 UTC]

oh, and did you read my bloodswap guide?

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vocaloidCyborg In reply to Blooming-Galaxy [2015-05-31 19:42:15 +0000 UTC]

YES
THIS HELPS A LOT
THANK YOU!

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sonaryforever In reply to vocaloidCyborg [2015-05-31 04:26:48 +0000 UTC]

Some people/trolls can be born blind....Just saying

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vocaloidCyborg In reply to sonaryforever [2015-05-31 19:41:45 +0000 UTC]

got it

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sonaryforever In reply to vocaloidCyborg [2015-05-31 21:32:07 +0000 UTC]

Mkay

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VitaniAmkova [2015-06-22 14:59:05 +0000 UTC]

*hisses angrily*

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ReinbowDash4792 [2015-06-01 20:01:56 +0000 UTC]

wouldn't kanaya's/terezi's eyes still be the same color?

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Emmyhedghog22 [2015-05-31 02:37:58 +0000 UTC]

THIS IS COOL!

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