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wansworld — Aatr : Chapter 0
Published: 2009-06-27 01:22:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 2568; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 47
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Audition for *TheReal-OCTwohoooo!
Yuri is =Yuritsuki
Con is *conartist18
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wai thanks bro! hahaha! yeah! lest go!
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Ahhh! Handsome artist at the ready! *Swoons*
Though your storyline can be a little more...revealing. XD
I can hardly tell the interactions between the artist and the various OCs - besides the fact that they are comfortable around one another (you know, like do they like joking around, or are the OCs serious and silent? These kind of things). I want to know how Wan fell from the sky tooo...;_;
He summons them using a pen knife, no?
^_^
I'll be rooting for you and my friends in the OCT! And, I personally think you deserve to be in the 64. I see a lot of potential. Don't think too little of yourself.
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hehe really thanks so much . . . .
glad you get the idea of my audition... and first of all dun need to have a conflict whit my chara's cause afterall their all I need in this adventure.
Yes hes summons them by a Utility cutter, where it can cut a rift through dimension were his OC's can pass through , haha oh well I guess the art did't convey it well this time haha well anyway thats thing I could work on the first round.
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hahaha just the interactions. Not exactly looking for conflict, but you get it. XD
I hope to see a good first round!
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hehehe
thanks
I'll work on it
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hehe someone is excited for this tournament.
I love to see one comic with a character who knows exactly what's going on and also prepared!
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hehehe yeah!
and man glad you see my point of view on my audition! thats the whole concept.
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I wouldn't say you didn't deserve entering the AATR. But there are some moments in your audition when we don't know how your characters come in. they just sort of pop out of nowhere, and there's no explanation to that (or not clear enough). I'm writing this as a friendly critic to be pondered (if you think it's worth it), and I wish you good luck for the rounds
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now that what a critic heheheh
thanks so much Imma note of that
but if you can see How they came was because of the Utility cutter, he cut through dimension, where hes OC can pass through
oh well i guess I failed to convey it on the art hahaha
I gotta fix that then. thanks a lot hjahahahaa
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you're welcome 
Yes, I saw the Utility cutter, but only after reading it over again, as it wasn't clear enough in the drawing.
I'm glad you took it as a critic to be thought of 
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hahaha . .
thanks agian
. . .
thanks so much!
and you too!
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ahehe thanks so much! mula sayu luppeet pare! hahaha!
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Psssh. Ignore all these guys. They're just jealous. Congrats on making it into the contest!
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heheeh . .I would really ignore if they didn't mention me hahaha! . . really annoying you know! but yeah Ithink they are just really jealos hahaha!
you too! see you there
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What is this I don't even-
Alright. The guy falls from the sky, I get that.
And he has this chick who comes out of nowhere and saves him.
And a roman guy who appears for all of one panel.
And a box-cutter that makes holes and chains.
And these other two guys.
And these other other two guys (who are other deviants...?) who are creepy.
...beyond that, I have no clue what's going on.
But hey! At-least you can draw better then I can!
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huh!? hahaha
Whatever I dun get it also! hahaha!
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I second lack. Because I can't understand your comment, either.
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...is that to say you don't know what ThreeBooks is asking, or you don't know what you just did?
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Im really sorry cause I dun get the idea . . .
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Ah. Well, just do the best you can. Good luck and God-speed.
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ah well thanks. hehehe!
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Ah, just how I like my auditions - short, sweet, and to the point. If you make it in, I'll definitely be rooting for ya. C:
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heheeh ! for me that the idea of audition! quick easy and less painful LOL! hahahahaha thank thanks som much!
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let see
IF
CC
VOID
SDL WINTER BRAWL
SDL WINTER BASH
thats all i remember hahaha!
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MAN
If you dont get in I'll be very dissapointed xD
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gee thanks so much hehehe! I really hope I could make it!
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it looks great, so I think you can do it : D
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ngayon ko lang narealize na cutter pala hawak niyo. akala ko pen xD
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wooooow!! nice! even though it's gray scale, i like the balance. Nice perspective-poses too. ang galing nyo po! ^^
the girl with the moon(?) hairpin looks like my OC. *runs* XDD
anyway, goodluck!
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aheheh thanks thanks!!!
ung girl di sya OC sya sa tunay na Buhay LOL!
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....or was it a guy?! OWO i sarreh.
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