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Published: 2014-08-05 18:40:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 2772; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 23
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Oh sweet Celestia, what is going on? Why am I so productive?
Sorry that it took me almost forever to update this
EDIT: it should make more sense now
This page was updated for improved English, text(how it looks), and some minor fixes.
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Weird... it was like that on my files... don't know what I did wrong this time
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Weird stuff happens sometimes
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Yep I have to say the redones are looking quite nice.
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gyazo.com/518fa13fa3a925d2377a…
Direct comparison.
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They still prove that you're not stuck here, and that it's possible to go from the Void to Equestria even when you didn't just leave Equestria. You have direct evidence that you can go home again. It's just a question of figuring out how.
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A little thing that threw me off while reading it,
Panel 2 last sentence:
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Those panels have a bad grammar... I will rework them eventually with the help of my grammar Nazis.
They started working with me from page 30 or so... so yeah. Expect some mistakes from me. and the ponies also look terrible...
But thanks for the comment.
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I really think you should prioritize this page. You've got Twilight saying the opposite of what you want her to say, and that's going to confuse everybody who sees this page until it's fixed.
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I will rework it eventually but not now. I can't just fix the text because some backgrounds are missing by now and because I really dislike the way it looks. I'd have to basically remake the pages and I'm just too overworked right now.
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I didn't really see any other mistakes in all of your pages, I just pointed this one out because it threw me off, also your ponies don't look terrible.
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I'm sure that there are more mistakes and I don't want to look at those pages because I see so many things that are wrong...it almost hurts...
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I'M SORRY FOR CAPS BUT I WANTED TO CATCH YOUR ATTENTION.
Have you read Applied Starlight? It seems you based this work of art on it. Also if any of you haven't - I highly recommend you do - here's the link: www.fimfiction.net/story/18523…
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You don't need caps to catch my attention.
I didn't read Applied Starlight. Thanks for showing it to me, it looks very interesting.
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you know that some version of a ponie (ask tumblr) is famous if it appears in some other comics or tumblrs 0_o!!!
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It's certainly an indication.
But may I ask what this has to do with this page?
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#Magloy
will you answer this question if you aren't going to answer this question?
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#Magloy
I see a lot of white stars in the Void. Any chance there is a purple one?
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You don't know what you just did!
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I'm gonna regret? Did I loose?
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No, I'd say you win the jackpot!
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THEY'RE GOING TO HAVE SEX?!
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Okay sorry NOT the jackpot...
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I'm sorry I really should think a bit before I answer you.
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I was just kidding
I do however hope to see such scene from you.
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I know that you want to see that.
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I don't know. But it doesn't look good for you.
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Don't make me cry again
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Didn't you just say you made a joke?
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Oh crap! What can I do to make you happy again without uploading explicit stuff?
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Uploading? You mean you have it?!
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You didn't deny it either!
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I don't have something I could upload. better?
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Nope. You must have something. EVERYPONY has
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Good thing I'm not a pony
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Oh well... exceptions prove the rules
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Rule #1: you're a pony.
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Rule #3: ponies draw themselves mating.
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Rule #4: ponies use toys during mating.
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