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Published: 2014-03-23 04:28:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 18413; Favourites: 573; Downloads: 0
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It's late but still saturday ahaha, I like the second recolor more than the first so WHELPDon't make difficult promises Elliot.
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You can steal at least one such thing from Harry Potter ... ... ... ^^
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I like the colors you're using. Its like theyre glowing.
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=.= why does this scene bring me dejavu
did I have a nightmare like this once? I am uncomfortable.
Regardless, glowy mouths. creepy cool! I didn't even give any thought to you handwriting your text until I saw the previous comment. Personally I like everything being done by hand~
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in the first first page I thought that he had a wet dream, so inviting his kid in the room was a bit odd.
I'm just going to say something really messed up.
But I had a wet dream at a friends place, and everyone was already awake... so I kinda had to just sit their pretending everything was ok, while everyone was walking around brushing their teeth, playing video games, making break fast, taking a shower and pretty much all eyes were on me.
What I did was basically shove my hanky down my shorts and hope that my underwear doesn't leak through... luckily for me it worked and there were no obvious stains.
It doesn't hurt to add things like that in comic strips, it adds a comedy to things and people sometimes like in my case, can relate to it
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Uhhhhhh... Thanks for that insight into your life?
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if it inspired you, I'm glad to have shared
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Well, it's inspired me to take up heavy drinking. Does that count?
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why?
did something embarrassing happen to you?
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Well everyone has embarrassing moments, but just to forget that I ever had a mental image of your comment... *cringes* as the barkeep refills the shot glass. The light illuminates the shiny cup tempting the lone figure to take another sip of the sour beverage
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You should stop visualizing other males in awkward positions.
at least I hope your a guy, drinking isn't good for girls.
Cool, I actually did some mind control their. my speech made you a drunkard... so just by reading what I said, you did something.
that's basically like mind control, only with odd results.
I... don't know what to say... maybe you shouldn't have read it... their is little I can do now to comfort you.
perhaps you should read my fan fiction which is totally not my life, which is perhaps destroy any possibilities of your remembering the porn o sleep over
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I was mostly kidding about taking up heavy drinking. I wish that I hadn't read it, but I was tired and I didn't realize the repercussions until it was too late. I don't fully understand the last part of the comment I am responding to "perhaps you should read my fan fiction which is totally not my life, which is perhaps destroy any possibilities of your remembering the porn o sleep over" but I digress... I just don't want to remember it.
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lol, well good to know I didn't cause any permanent brain damage.
Ya, my fan fic is A naruto based story.
I do mess around with the girls a bit, but nothing serious.
try it out, you might like it
precipitous120.deviantart.com/…
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Wait... What do mean you mess around With the girls? But anyway I might check it out even though I'm not a huge nary to fan
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ok... na, like this scene I just wrote... me messing around with the girls.
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Ar’jies darted his eyes to one side “Could you read it for me, it’s not that I can’t read it’s just that I never learnt to read cursive… NO really” Hinata stared at him before turning her head and giving a sympathetic smile, she didn’t believe him.
As they traded hands, their fingers met. A light brush, a comforting embrace as the texture of the two hands met, but then the moment passed.
Hinata picked a flower from her pouch, gently rolling it between her fingers, reading the text out loud “It says here this plant’s name is ‘Naked lady’” She gave an embarrassed whimper before continuing, “It says here, the plant can be used to treat gout and has anti rheumatic, cathartic, and emetic properties. It also says that the flower is extremely poisonous and only to use the roots and seeds. I’m sorry Ar’jies, I really don’t know what any of this means.” The young girls face suddenly turned red with realisation. “augh!” Hinata dropped the flower back into the pouch and rubbed the green on her fingers onto her cloths, having felt stupid for smearing the poisonous plant all over her hands while Ar’jies only laughed.
“I’m so glad you discovered that before me, I was already considering eating a petal to see what it would do… in this case, nothing good. I wonder why Tensue would want us to find such an odd plant...” Hinata stared off at Ar’jies, having never seen him maintain a smile for so long, and then she too began to giggle.
“O Ar’jies, I’ve never seen you so happy before. I’ve seen you keep your half smile, but now I can see how you look when you’re actually happy” Hinata’s smile quickly vanished to a stunned expression, she had forgotten something. “No, I’m going to be late, father is going to be so disappointed. Ar’jies another time ok, I enjoyed it!” She lifted the pouch from around her neck put it over Ar’jies, giving him a kiss good bye before even realising the intimacy if what she had done.
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This looks awesome so far!! Can't wait to see more!!
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHH YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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I believe new pages are released each saturday/sunday
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Uhhh *-* action starts I-I want to know what happens next QAQ *puppy eyes*
Ya' know? i still can't figure out just how much work just one page of this must have x^x Whispy-san you are a really amazing artist
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This looks so interesting can't wait to read more!!
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Aweeee!! ^///-///^ Elli is such a good big brothah Abababa~
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I love the coloring and the originality of the story! Also, I think I may know what's going on here.
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omg Elliot I love you WHY U SO AWESOME?!
Action yay! I love the monsters, great idea! I'm so excited to see more!
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oh snap! Its getting exiting already! XD I have a reaallly good feeling about this comic! Loving the art!
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This is looking so great so far even though I'm screaming in terror on the inside right now...
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This is sooooo coool asdfghejadsfyuhejasf <333
theres powers
theres cute and adorable and handsome guys
theres monsters
can't wait for more :'D <333
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Elliot and Phillip are so cute I want to cry.
Invisibility spell! Awesome!
I really love the art and flow of the comic so far.
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Love the dark color tones of this page a lot more. It's a lot more ambient and goes well with all the glowing effects you use. Good work!
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hehe thank you, and yea the first two pages were a tad too light so i darkened the lines a bit ; v ;
when the sunshine pages come into view i'll do better in consistency ahah xD
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