pune [2001-03-17 21:46:26 +0000 UTC]
The blue part is rad, don't know about the white, could be a bit to bright.
pune
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djshifty [2001-03-17 19:52:27 +0000 UTC]
It seems to be a pretty sweet, flowing movement. I dont think much should be changed, except for the font and title. It could be a bit less bold and a lot crisper so that it wouldn't take away from the piece. Otherwise i'd keep the colors and scheme.
One thing I was thinking was how sweet it would look if it were inverted. Maybe a fiery wave....hm....
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yoozer [2001-03-17 19:46:41 +0000 UTC]
the white hurts my eyes... and for the rest i'd choose another font.
hm, not really constructive criticism, right?
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