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RainbowShimmers [2018-02-07 06:56:17 +0000 UTC]

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Hello, I would like to start out by saying your art style is super adorable and its a nice little animation ^_^. The animation is very smooth and the pose is absolutely adorable and nicely made! The shading you add is rather nice and it all comes together into a nice picture!

As far as things I'd say you could work on goes would include trying a smoother animation, more shading possibly, and maybe looking into some wing anatomy. Please keep in mind that this critique is in no way meant to discourage you from continuing your awesome art!

For a smoother animation you could possibly try more frames or a faster speed on it. It seems sort of... I guess choppy to me as it transitions from the eye closed position back and forth. I feel like the eyelash line there is sort of awkward.

As for shading, some darker values wouldn't hurt, and it'd add more pop! I'm personally not a fan of the block hair highlights, and I feel like they add a sort of harshness to the picture that isn't really found anywhere else. Also, I feel the hair is rather flat compared to the rest of her body.

And last of all, the wing to me, is odd. I feel the fingers of it are placed oddly and are sort of inconsistent. Fingers don't usually change their thickness between them to what I know, and they have more of a joint than a smooth curve. The last finger toward the "elbow" of the wing is odd in the sense of just the way it bends. To me, it doesn't really fit in with the other fingers closer to the front.

Other than that, you have a really nice style, and I hope you continue on with your art!

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Jynka [2018-02-08 15:48:35 +0000 UTC]

UGH this is sooo cuteeeee

Psst: would you do commissions of these? Would be interested ~

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