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Published: 2013-07-03 04:18:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 1066; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 5
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Description The latest WIP. I’m starting to second-guess my original composition and concept. The water is looking too distracting and Tenzin seems to dominate wherever he’s placed due to his size and colour. I think I might shrink him down a bit, make Asami a bit bigger and rethink my water-scheme.

Lemme know what you guys think! Any thoughts are loved ;---;


Will move to the scraps later~
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MissZenGray [2013-07-08 03:05:04 +0000 UTC]

Epicccccc

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Streamwolf8 [2013-07-03 11:07:51 +0000 UTC]

Looking good! I think if you increased all foreground character sizes a bit (except maybe Tenzin) and cut back on a bit of the water detail (ie make it earlier in the cresting stage so there's not nearly so much foam cutting into everything) that might fix your distracting-water and balance out Tenzin a bit. I wouldn't make anyone smaller...

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WithoutName In reply to Streamwolf8 [2013-07-03 20:21:52 +0000 UTC]

awesome. thanks for the suggestion~

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hamstermermaid [2013-07-03 07:40:01 +0000 UTC]

It looks very nice.

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WithoutName In reply to hamstermermaid [2013-07-03 20:21:58 +0000 UTC]

thankyou~

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