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WordOfChen β€” Invincible
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Published: 2018-07-29 16:01:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 6455; Favourites: 70; Downloads: 0
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Description I am a laborer of dreams and I'm building up a pyramid.
The ghosts might try to kill me but I learned to always live with it.
The fragile thoughts that draw you to the edge of your ill mind;
Believe when I say that giving up would be a true crime.

The only thing that you should do is plow ahead forward,
No stepping back because I got your back and that's a foreword
An introductory paragraph to what it means to me,
when I have always told you that we are going to be:
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Verifiety [2023-09-28 08:27:48 +0000 UTC]

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That-Quiet-Guy [2019-07-17 17:19:24 +0000 UTC]

You said it yourself. Giving up would be a crime. Sorry to say that I was slow on picking that advice up. Yeah, I got back on DA. Read an old blog post of mine about your video series and it snapped me out of a several year slump. Your writing has gotten stronger and I can sense the honest effort you're putting forth. It's hard to be an artist in a world full to bursting.

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Redsterfish [2018-12-08 15:51:24 +0000 UTC]

If people in the mall see you go backwards ....what?

They might kill you, or just splash you on the floor.

Invincible is a pious hope

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Redsterfish In reply to Redsterfish [2019-03-18 12:58:13 +0000 UTC]

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Shadow-Walker-22 [2018-11-30 03:38:02 +0000 UTC]

Nicely doneΒ 

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kierakiller [2018-10-10 18:21:02 +0000 UTC]

I like this one it flows nicely and I can picture it well

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