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This is a six word story:I just pretend to be profound
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Glad to bring you laughs ^^
-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates
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Thanks! I've just recently discovered your work, you're very talented! Can't wait to see what's next!
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Thank you, I just try to work hard to keep producing unique poetry that people will enjoy ^^
-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates
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I totally think you succeed!
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My life put into six words. :3
& schoolwork is such a time consuming thing, isn't it? I loathe it, but nevertheless, it must be done!
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Haha yep :3
-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates
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Haha xD yer funny xDD
-Co-captain Hayes
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Hmm...A Six-Word Story? I Didn't Know There Were Things Like That.
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They do exist :3
-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates
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Thank ye so much fer readin' this piece and we hope ye enjoyed it, Chenbeard is currently bogged down with schoolwork, but we want ye t' know that yer readership is deeply appreciated. Thanks again ^^
-Co-captain Hayes
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i really wish him all the luck for his examinations.
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Thank ye kindly
- Co-captain Hayes
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(get all a1s :L:L) shouts the sheep from behind
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I dun get it!
Hahaha, my brain is slow right now, but sounds like the best six-word story around!
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Thank ye so much fer readin' this piece and we hope ye enjoyed it, Chenbeard is currently bogged down with schoolwork, but we want ye t' know that yer readership is deeply appreciated. Thanks again ^^
-Co-captain Hayes
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You know, honestly, this is actually pretty good, especially for just being something to joke around with.
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Thank ye so much fer readin' this piece and we hope ye enjoyed it, Chenbeard is currently bogged down with schoolwork, but we want ye t' know that yer readership is deeply appreciated. Thanks again ^^
-Co-captain Hayes
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I love six word stories. At their best, they can hide a whole story in them, if you just know how to read it that way. However, I don't think this is the best six word story I've read - don't get me wrong, it is good - it feels more like just a statement to me. It just defines a person, doesn't tell a story. Then again, the fact that I had to google up the word 'profound' might have killed my imagination a little, but that is all my fault for not being better at English.
Congratulations on making it to the front page though, and you certainly have sparked my interest.
I shall wander through your gallery now.
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Thank ye so much fer readin' this piece and we hope ye enjoyed it, Chenbeard is currently bogged down with schoolwork, but we want ye t' know that yer readership is deeply appreciated. Thanks again ^^
-Co-captain Hayes
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Thank ye so much fer readin' this piece and we hope ye enjoyed it, Chenbeard is currently bogged down with schoolwork, but we want ye t' know that yer readership is deeply appreciated. Thanks again ^^
-Co-captain Hayes
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Brilliance, just sheer brilliance!
I wish I'd thought of that!
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Thank ye so much fer readin' this piece and we hope ye enjoyed it, Chenbeard is currently bogged down with schoolwork, but we want ye t' know that yer readership is deeply appreciated. Thanks again ^^
-Co-captain Hayes
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That's not really a story at all, that's just a six word statement about yourself
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according to "the pocket oxford dictionary", (produced in association with oxford university press)
story n. (pl. -ies) 1. account of imaginary or past events; tale, anecdote.
hence, statement can contain a story.
just need to expand your thoughts a little, i'm sure anything can be turned into anything.
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Wow thanks for including that lovely definition. I really needed that for clarification, WHEW. I can finally see a clear account of some sort of past event through these six words. /sarcasm
I think that the statement is really interesting, but I just don't think it is quite specific enough to suggest any sort of story. Yes it is hard to be specific when you are limited to only using six words however there are much more successful six word stories that blatantly suggest an event of some sort. For example, Ernest Hemingway's six word story: "For sale: baby shoes, never worn" is slightly general, but it's specific enough to suggest that some kind of event happened for there to be a reason that the baby shoes had never been worn. The six word story on this page however doesn't really suggest any prior event. It's merely a statement about the way that the author thinks about themselves and possibly the way they view society. There are many possible reasons/events that have caused the author to pretend to be profound, but the six word story isn't specific enough to focus the reader's thoughts on a certain type of event or anecdote that could have happened. All it really suggests is that the author just arbitrarily pretends to be profound, and that's just the way they have always been. Therefore it's merely a statement. An interesting one, but not one that suggests a story.
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Thank ye so much fer readin' this piece and we hope ye enjoyed it, Chenbeard is currently bogged down with schoolwork, but we want ye t' know that yer readership is deeply appreciated. Thanks again ^^
-Co-captain Hayes
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Please, please, please, can I use this in my dA signiature? Of course, I'll give you the credit. 
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Haha ye may go ahead lass, as long as ye credit back then we don't mind ye usin' it, tha Captain be happy to let ye use it 
-Co-captain Hayes
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Probably one of your best works.
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Hey that was six words too!
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Thank ye so much fer readin' this piece and we hope ye enjoyed it, Chenbeard is currently bogged down with schoolwork, but we want ye t' know that yer readership is deeply appreciated. Thanks again ^^
-Co-captain Hayes
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...the sheer truth of that statement blows my mind.
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Thank ye so much fer readin' this piece and we hope ye enjoyed it, Chenbeard is currently bogged down with schoolwork, but we want ye t' know that yer readership is deeply appreciated. Thanks again ^^
-Co-captain Hayes
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Thank ye so much fer readin' this piece and we hope ye enjoyed it, Chenbeard is currently bogged down with schoolwork, but we want ye t' know that yer readership is deeply appreciated. Thanks again ^^
-Co-captain Hayes
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Thank ye so much fer readin' this piece and we hope ye enjoyed it, Chenbeard is currently bogged down with schoolwork, but we want ye t' know that yer readership is deeply appreciated. Thanks again ^^
-Co-captain Hayes
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Congradulations sir. you are on the front again
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