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Published: 2008-04-02 14:46:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 92; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description We always chase after those who run away
we always gravitate to those out of our own orbits
always try to cling to those with an opposite charge

It's science that keeps certain people apart.

Science is a debasement of fact
When you try to order chaos, the world tilts
When a thing isn't right, it just ISN'T

I can attempt to right the wrong of it all with poetry
but any small leap forward I make
well
it's just a minor metaphoric musing that stunts any potential growth.
I hereby end this experiment.
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Comments: 8

Effamay [2008-04-07 19:39:28 +0000 UTC]

had me caught from the very first line

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x-outsider-x In reply to Effamay [2008-04-09 01:50:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you
This was almost a short story. It might still turn out to be, if I can find the time.

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Effamay In reply to x-outsider-x [2008-04-09 08:43:47 +0000 UTC]

I do hope that you can find time. It always intrigues me when I've liked a piece then I'm told it could have been more... I wanna know what the more is

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x-outsider-x [2008-04-06 03:22:48 +0000 UTC]

I've never heard it - is it worth seeking out?

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blue-strawberry In reply to x-outsider-x [2008-04-07 14:01:21 +0000 UTC]

you didn't hit reply, but I can definatly say: yes! As is their other stuff.

this is... fantastic. I'm lacking words today, but yes, hopefully the fav says what I want to say.

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x-outsider-x In reply to blue-strawberry [2008-04-09 02:04:30 +0000 UTC]

I'll have to search out some Coldplay then - thanks!
Thanks also for the fave - most appreciated

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blue-strawberry In reply to x-outsider-x [2008-04-09 07:25:34 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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ihatenature [2008-04-02 21:24:56 +0000 UTC]

This made me want to listen to The Scientist by Coldplay.

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