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Xenstroke — Cloud High (updated)
Published: 2013-07-14 03:18:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 1671; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 8
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It is very calming being among the clouds. When I went to EverfreeNW, it was my first time on a plane. After take off and the plane had been cruising for a while, i looked out the window. What I saw was beautiful and I actually started calming down.(update)
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Pretty, and a nifty style.
A few thoughts, though:
More shadowing would help bring out depth, the hair appears very flat without it.
The eye coloring is wicked, kind of creepy in a good way, could use eyelashes and a little tweaking of the outer eye shape to make the face seem less flat.
Muzzle is shaped oddly, short and squat, makes the head look more alien than MLP pony style.
There doesn't seem to be a chest or belly so much as a neck with wings and legs attached, the neck would look better if it were a little longer as well.
The feathers have an interesting stylistic look which is kind of cool however the leading edge of the wing looks like a tentacle that they're attached to. They also seem too far forward and low on the body.
Is one of the hind legs missing or hidden?
The clouds are very nice, wonderful blending of grays and whites, they look really good.
Overall very nice use of color, just needs more shadows to make them pop out more.
Looking forward to seeing more!
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