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xpaganangelx — Seeking the Truth in You
Published: 2005-06-22 21:11:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 120; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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don’t try to lie to meI lie with the best
I sometimes even wake up next to them
lies fornicate lies
their multiple replication
over dominates
overpowers
I wont be fooled
not again
not this time
does honesty ring a bell?
just please tell the truth
is that in your vocabulary?
I wont waste my time
if I’m being used
tell me
I’m used to it
been used and abused before
(not that I minded the abuse)
just don’t make me trust you
open up my heart
I’ll keep it closed
as long as I can
physical, non-emotional
I can handle that
but I cant stand one sided emotion
just tell me the truth...
6.22.05
Comments: 10
Great poem, how about "Deception Is Your Truth" i know it's a bit shit but its all i could think of.
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Cool stuff, I like. It's not too much to ask for honesty.
A couple suggestions for a title...
1. All I Ask Is Honesty
2. Seeking Truth
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its good. how about through the eyes of truth. idk.
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thanks cutie...whats w/ the crying tho...didnt wanna make anyone cry...
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Like it a lot... reminds me of many men i can apply it to.
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I really like this one! hmm.. the only title I can come up with is"Truth", or maybe "The Truth in You"... Great Job though!
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cool,
i know this is a fairly simple title :$ but how about "because you're a liar"
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hmm...thanks for the suggestion. i'll think on that
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