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XxElric-HimexX — Happy Valentines Day~

Published: 2012-02-14 17:06:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1779; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 4
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Description Chibi L and Light on Valentines~
I think Light's pissed L's paying more attention to the cake, ne?
X3
I kinda like how it turned out, sadly I couldn't get L's skin right so he's gray TT^TT
This pictures actually hanging on display at my school(Against my will though, the teachers forced it T^T)
Anyway, hope you enjoy~ <3
PS Sorry about the overly long arms Also L's standing up straight and if you've seen the movies and all that you'll know how straight he is standing straight XD
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LeNoodles [2012-02-27 06:06:39 +0000 UTC]

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OK, The first thing I see that is wrong with this picture is the eyes. They are waaay to big, therefore making them look like teenage girls. You should draw smaller eyes if you want to make them look more like, um, male. The shading for the eyes is cute, but the smaller shine is a bit unnecessary. If you look at L's left eye, it cuts off where the face ends. I don't really like that, it looks a bit...awkward. I recommend you look up a tutorial for 3/4 eyes. However the emotions are clearly depicted, which is always a good thing.
L's arms are not equal length-wise. I think the piece of cake is tiny... (considering L XD) I would also recommend a more eye-catching background, instead of just pink. L's hair is a little flat, and Light's hair is so long that I thought he was a girl when I first saw it...(Sorry...><) I don't see a neck for Light, and again, that other eye is a little... meh. You could use some practice with that. I'm not sure if chibis are your style are not, but the head-to-body anatomy is ok (if they are chibis.)Light's hair shading is a little choppy, you need it to flow e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
The clothes and stuff looks good.
This is a very cute drawing and you have a LOT of potential, keep practicing!! Good Job!! a.deviantart.net/avatars/e/p/e… " alt=" " title="epicclapplz"/>

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XxElric-HimexX In reply to LeNoodles [2012-02-27 06:13:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I failed at it and I think I'm going to try doing it again when I've gotten better at chibi's(I'm just learning how to draw them, just stared a few weeks ago and I slack off too much XD) but I still need to learn how to draw male chibis XD and the whole anatomy thing XP
(The clothes turned out okay-ish but I made Light look like he has bewbs DX)

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LeNoodles In reply to XxElric-HimexX [2012-02-27 06:17:51 +0000 UTC]

I wish you luck, and I think the whole point of chibis is to have big eyes, but you kind of went overkill. DX
I actually thought L was the man boob thing.XD

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XxElric-HimexX In reply to LeNoodles [2012-02-27 06:25:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I go overboard with eyes most of the time (I really have to work on that DX)
That is true, DX I made L have man bewbs, DX

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LeNoodles In reply to XxElric-HimexX [2012-02-27 06:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Practice makes perfect!
I'm okay with that. XD

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XxElric-HimexX In reply to LeNoodles [2012-02-29 11:32:13 +0000 UTC]

Or at least somewhat close XD
As a proud L stalker/fangirl I feel ashamed XD Yet... At the same time I'm laughing my butt off XD

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LeNoodles In reply to XxElric-HimexX [2012-03-02 01:09:21 +0000 UTC]

I suppose.
Pffft- XD

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XxElric-HimexX In reply to LeNoodles [2012-03-02 02:07:04 +0000 UTC]

Yup
XD lol

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