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LeNoodles [2012-02-27 06:06:39 +0000 UTC]
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OK, The first thing I see that is wrong with this picture is the eyes. They are waaay to big, therefore making them look like teenage girls. You should draw smaller eyes if you want to make them look more like, um, male. The shading for the eyes is cute, but the smaller shine is a bit unnecessary. If you look at L's left eye, it cuts off where the face ends. I don't really like that, it looks a bit...awkward. I recommend you look up a tutorial for 3/4 eyes. However the emotions are clearly depicted, which is always a good thing.
L's arms are not equal length-wise. I think the piece of cake is tiny... (considering L XD) I would also recommend a more eye-catching background, instead of just pink. L's hair is a little flat, and Light's hair is so long that I thought he was a girl when I first saw it...(Sorry...><) I don't see a neck for Light, and again, that other eye is a little... meh. You could use some practice with that. I'm not sure if chibis are your style are not, but the head-to-body anatomy is ok (if they are chibis.)Light's hair shading is a little choppy, you need it to flow e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
The clothes and stuff looks good.
This is a very cute drawing and you have a LOT of potential, keep practicing!! Good Job!! a.deviantart.net/avatars/e/p/e… " alt=" " title="epicclapplz"/>
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LeNoodles In reply to XxElric-HimexX [2012-02-27 06:17:51 +0000 UTC]
I wish you luck, and I think the whole point of chibis is to have big eyes, but you kind of went overkill. DX
I actually thought L was the man boob thing.XD
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XxElric-HimexX In reply to LeNoodles [2012-02-29 11:32:13 +0000 UTC]
Or at least somewhat close XD
As a proud L stalker/fangirl I feel ashamed XD Yet... At the same time I'm laughing my butt off XD
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