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Published: 2011-11-06 19:42:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1089; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 4
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Description My contest entry for the contest 3. Now for the backstory...
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Bluestar looked up at the cold starless sky that only held a cruel grin for a moon. She slowly trodded to their meeting place, full of sorrow. Sorrow for herself, and sorrow for the small kit she had clenched by the scruff ever so gently. She reached the opening and froze, for there he was. Brokenstar. Her lover, and the father of her new son. She was afraid to approach him, for he had no idea that this kit had been brought into the world by them. She knew that he would be furious. Slowly, with head hung low, she padded out to see him. He turned at the scent of her sweet fur and perked his ears.
"Bluestar! how are-" He was cut short by the strange scent that whiffed to his nose. he was confused at what it was, not having been in the nursery long enough to identify the smell.
"Bluestar, what are you holding?"
" A kit, Brokenstar." Bluestar's voice cracked as the tears started streaming from her eyes.
"A KIT? A KIT?!?!? WHY DO YOU HAVE A KIT?!?!?!" Brokenstar screeched with anger.
"He is our kit, Brokenstar!" BLuestar sobbed the truth that she had hidden for so long. Only Spottedleaf had known when she was pregnant.
"What did you name him?" Brokenstar paced angrily back and forth.
"His name is Wolfkit."
"Wolfkit? That sounds too powerful a name for such an ominous kit. I will take him to Shadowclan with me, and no one will know you were his mother. But we must never see each other again, alright Bluestar?"
"Alright." With that, the huge dark tom turned, kit in tow, back towards Shadowcan territory, while Bluestar sobbed and sobbed with the anguish ov never seeing her kit or lover ever again.
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Yea.... so thats it! i just put my favorite villan with my favorite good guy and Voila!



brokenstar/bluestar/warriors: erin hunter
Wolfkit: me
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bluestar1037431 [2012-07-14 23:06:44 +0000 UTC]

I wrote a story similar to this, where Bluestar and Brokenstar have kits (or, A kit) for a conest called Love Vs. Hate (Broken=hate, Blue=Love). It can be found here: [link]

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xxninjaxalchemistxx In reply to bluestar1037431 [2012-08-05 01:19:55 +0000 UTC]

i finally found the time to read your story and i have to say, i am impressed! it was a great read, and i love how you used cats that arent in the original series, but in the special edition books and field guides, and wove them in to fit into the story plot line. i absolutely loved it!

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bluestar1037431 In reply to xxninjaxalchemistxx [2012-08-07 01:15:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I have an amazing imagination. Right now, I'm working on... hang on a sec *goes through the stories in head*... 28 stories and have finished two other

1. The Titanic, her Sisters, and Me (Finished)
2. Death (Finished)
3. Revenge (Started)
4. Grief (Planned)
5. Silence (Planned)
6. Strife (Planned)
7. Shock (Started)
8. Leafstar’s Destiny (Started)
9. Tinyleaf’s Love (Started)
10. Missingstar’s Choice (Started)
11. Destruction of the Clans (Planned)
12. Rebuilding the Clans (Planned)
13. The Story of the Egg-stealers (Started)
14. Jonny, the Iceberg that Sank the Titanic (Planned)
15. Blackfur’s Secret (Planned)
16. Lightningfast’s Story (Planned)
17. Tigerstripe’s Promise (Planned)
18. Mapleshape’s Revenge (Started)
19. Scourge’s Soul (Started)
20. Strikeheart’s Fate (Planned)
21. The Dark Battle (Started)
22. Betrayal (Planned)
23. Disgust (Planned)
24. Relief (Planned)
25. Hope (Planned)
26. Love (Planned)
27. Hate (Planned)
28. Silence #2 (Started)
29. Tigerstar’s Death Manga Collection (Started)
30. Hawkfrost’s Death Manga Collection (Planned)

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xxninjaxalchemistxx In reply to bluestar1037431 [2012-08-24 19:09:41 +0000 UTC]

wow.... you have earned a watch from me!

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bluestar1037431 In reply to bluestar1037431 [2012-08-07 04:51:45 +0000 UTC]

Check that... 33 stories, and have finished 3
Rise and Fall of the Furious Five (Planned)
The Dogs that Saved the World (Planned)
What is this Feeling? (Finished)

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IbiteU [2011-11-07 07:19:24 +0000 UTC]

awwww... I'm listening to Coldplay's fix you and I clicked the pic and as soon as it loaded the lines "and the tears come streaming down your face, when you lose something you can't replace" and I was like TT_TT when the first thing I happened to see was Bluestar crying with Dragonkit clamped firmly in her mouth nd then as if by magic "when you love someone but it goes to waste, could it be worse?" so yeah just fet like mentioning the song's linesmatching this scene quite well!

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xxninjaxalchemistxx In reply to IbiteU [2011-11-07 10:34:56 +0000 UTC]

I've never heard that song so I can't say anything against it haha but I will look it up

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IbiteU In reply to xxninjaxalchemistxx [2011-11-08 05:30:40 +0000 UTC]

when you do message me! (it really does match ur pic)

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xxninjaxalchemistxx In reply to IbiteU [2011-11-08 17:09:19 +0000 UTC]

gladly

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Skyfeather1387 [2011-11-07 01:49:58 +0000 UTC]

I this.

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xxninjaxalchemistxx In reply to Skyfeather1387 [2011-11-07 02:59:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Skyfeather1387 In reply to xxninjaxalchemistxx [2011-11-07 20:25:54 +0000 UTC]

no problem! ^.^

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xxninjaxalchemistxx In reply to Skyfeather1387 [2011-11-08 17:09:32 +0000 UTC]


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jayxbriar4ever [2011-11-07 00:12:06 +0000 UTC]

omg this pic is awesome. You should do a fanfic of these two starting from when they first fell in love and going until dragonkit's death.

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xxninjaxalchemistxx In reply to jayxbriar4ever [2011-11-08 17:18:22 +0000 UTC]

i am planning on writing the story from when brokenstar and bluestar first meet up until the point when dragonkit becoms a warror, finds out who his real parents are, goes insane, and kills himself. It will be an interesting read :3

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jayxbriar4ever In reply to xxninjaxalchemistxx [2011-11-10 03:30:55 +0000 UTC]

when is it coming out???

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xxninjaxalchemistxx In reply to jayxbriar4ever [2011-11-10 11:58:58 +0000 UTC]

soon.... soon.... haha

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AURORE1842 [2011-11-06 21:22:04 +0000 UTC]

What happen to the kit after ?

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xxninjaxalchemistxx In reply to AURORE1842 [2011-11-06 21:23:04 +0000 UTC]

im goin to write a fanfic bout it

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AURORE1842 In reply to xxninjaxalchemistxx [2011-11-06 21:47:57 +0000 UTC]

cool can't wait

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