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Description for *Yoii-San sorry it's kinda late !!
i hope you're ok with it - yeah ; v ; <3

i know you wanted full body, so i did it traditionally. hope that's ok XD (i like my traditional stuff better anyway XD) i dunno why full body was a must, but ok, xD i had fun, XD

he is a really neat character - i hope you like how i drew him ; A ;
and i added blue shading on the skin [testing stuff, lol] - ORZ IT LOOKS TERRIBLE!! I'm so sorry!! pretend it doesn't look like that XD
and i did a random BG that may or may not be fitting. ahhh, oh well, it was fun and it filled up space XD

i hope you like this, really! i spent a loot of time on it xD about an hour and a half. XD ; and idk his name (since you keep it secret XD) but i like himmmm
SO YEAH THANKS AND BAI
ps my mom likes your ocs. LOL
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Comments: 34

Tamster224 [2011-05-17 20:11:26 +0000 UTC]

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I quite like this piece, one of your better pieces, I would personally say. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> Anyway, down to business.

The composition:
I'll admit it's one you use a lot, but the attitude that comes with it fits in with the character's personality from what I can see, and the expression is really fittinf.
The colouring:
Overall, it's quite pleasing the eye, but if I'm going to be nitty-picky, I would've like to off seen some more defined crease lines, and some direct shadows. It's quite neat, but i'm going to be fussy about your lineart on the circle, but i'll just assume that was accident.
The background:
It's simple, but effective, and it completes the feel of the piece. Only other i'll pick on is that you can still see some pencil lines on the clouds, and the hair.
But overall, you did a very nice piece. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to Tamster224 [2011-05-17 20:17:59 +0000 UTC]

thank you ; A ; <3333 that is so helpful!

yeah - i'll work on more clothing detail. thank you, * A *
some of the smaller details got "lost" in the inking/colouring process, but yes i agree overall i need more xD

and yeah, the pencil was left cuz i didn't have an eraser to erase it XD;;; it had broken halfway through, XD;;; orz

thank you so much <333 i agree with your critique - but i have noticed your star system is a little weird? ah, maybe i don't know XD ;; sorry lol.
thanks you're helpfullll

and yeah i don't usually give super unique poses for commishes/ats - since i don't wanna mess with the character's personality too much since it isn't my own xD
so yeah ; v ;

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Tamster224 In reply to xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx [2011-05-17 20:21:42 +0000 UTC]

No problemmm. ;u; <3

Eee, about the star system, ignore that, I haven't gotten the hang of it yet.

Fair enough! I personally try to tailor the pose accordingly to their personality. C:

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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to Tamster224 [2011-05-17 20:23:55 +0000 UTC]

no no it's ok!! it looks mostly ok - don't worry XD

that's a good idea.. i'll try to do more of that ; v ; make poses that fit them..
though this oc was quite literally shrouded in mystery xD i don't know his name, personality, etc..
but no yeah i'll try cool poses!! thank you muchly <3333

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Tamster224 In reply to xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx [2011-05-18 19:41:24 +0000 UTC]

C: Oh, I see.
Hehe, no problem. <3

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Cieffie [2013-01-06 03:17:16 +0000 UTC]

WOA! WOA! WOAAA!! How come I haven't commented on this before now??? O___O!!!
He looks really awesome I love the way you drew him! It's been quite a while since this was submitted, I can't remember what I drew for you But I hope you liked my part of the trade! Anyways, thanks again for drawing him <3 And glad to hear your mother likes my OC's haha

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TheArcaneArts [2011-05-22 08:35:32 +0000 UTC]

FDAHJKFDAHJK ARROWS!
/steals them

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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to TheArcaneArts [2011-05-22 19:21:53 +0000 UTC]

FJKSJHGKSL YES ARROWS 8'D
/gives you moooar

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TheArcaneArts In reply to xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx [2011-05-23 02:07:39 +0000 UTC]

FDHJKFDAHJKLFDAHJK YES MOAR ARROWSSSSS DFANMFDFHJKFD
/eats them

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TheRainbowDragon [2011-05-20 15:16:30 +0000 UTC]

8D <333333 I'm jelly of your art loll

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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to TheRainbowDragon [2011-05-20 17:58:20 +0000 UTC]

OH OH KDJHBFSJDH that makes me happy o // A // o thanks!
BUT NO I DON'T WANT YOU SAD ; A ; <33 unless you're not? XD

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TheRainbowDragon In reply to xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx [2011-05-20 18:27:48 +0000 UTC]

Idk

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NeoSoundBox [2011-05-19 01:34:55 +0000 UTC]

reminds me of the movie
....up
(SEE WHAT I DID THER?)

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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to NeoSoundBox [2011-05-19 01:36:35 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE THAT MOVIE LOL

yessss i ddiiiiid <3 LOL

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NeoSoundBox In reply to xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx [2011-05-19 01:38:56 +0000 UTC]

so tis iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
but seriously this was a great piece <3

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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to NeoSoundBox [2011-05-19 01:59:39 +0000 UTC]

bdaww thankss Q A Q

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Pikirii [2011-05-18 21:59:47 +0000 UTC]

Some people just look best in their entirity.

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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to Pikirii [2011-05-19 00:14:40 +0000 UTC]

i agree c: <3 like you mean they look better when you see all of them?

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Pikirii In reply to xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx [2011-05-19 00:25:54 +0000 UTC]

Yeah.

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SilentProXy [2011-05-18 18:24:17 +0000 UTC]

hes hot -drools-

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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to SilentProXy [2011-05-18 18:26:33 +0000 UTC]

bdaw thanks XD
i'm glad you think so xD

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tomoe342 [2011-05-17 23:10:14 +0000 UTC]

wow.
this is one of the few art trade's you've done that I know what he's supposed to look like.
When above the influence got serious

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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to tomoe342 [2011-05-17 23:44:12 +0000 UTC]

OH LOL YES
the arrows
ABOVE THE INFLUENCE, TTLY. lol.

and yeah that is pretty neat you know who it issss

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tomoe342 In reply to xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx [2011-05-17 23:55:00 +0000 UTC]

Tomoe: I like yoii's OCs
Mizu: Do you know who else likes yoii's OCs?
My mom!!!
i thought that when i red the descrip

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hazardbaby [2011-05-17 22:18:38 +0000 UTC]

Nice use of blue lighting on his skin

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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to hazardbaby [2011-05-17 23:44:18 +0000 UTC]

oh oh thank you * A *

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Sjcodan [2011-05-17 20:36:15 +0000 UTC]

nice!
(ps, look at my sig. should i make it bigger?)

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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to Sjcodan [2011-05-17 20:39:47 +0000 UTC]

thanks!
oh my gosh, your sig XD hahaha!
no, if it was bigger, it would dis-format comments on pages XD
if anything sliiightly smaller? ; A ; or not, if you don't want XD

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Sjcodan In reply to xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx [2011-05-17 23:13:14 +0000 UTC]

so, bigger it is!

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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to Sjcodan [2011-05-17 23:45:22 +0000 UTC]

no i mean-
...
i don't want my pages on my picture's comments to be thrown off because of a sig.
like seriously, i like my pages to look NICE.
i'm sorry.
:c

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Sjcodan In reply to xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx [2011-05-18 00:05:18 +0000 UTC]

I was kidding, dont worry

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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to Sjcodan [2011-05-18 00:20:57 +0000 UTC]

oooh ok!!
naw kidding is fineeee <3

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ArtChick94 [2011-05-17 20:09:32 +0000 UTC]

oohh hes hawt XDD

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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to ArtChick94 [2011-05-17 20:12:07 +0000 UTC]

oh thank you ; a ; i-i think so too ; A ; <3 xD

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