Comments: 34
Tamster224 [2011-05-17 20:11:26 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
I quite like this piece, one of your better pieces, I would personally say. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> Anyway, down to business.
The composition:
I'll admit it's one you use a lot, but the attitude that comes with it fits in with the character's personality from what I can see, and the expression is really fittinf.
The colouring:
Overall, it's quite pleasing the eye, but if I'm going to be nitty-picky, I would've like to off seen some more defined crease lines, and some direct shadows. It's quite neat, but i'm going to be fussy about your lineart on the circle, but i'll just assume that was accident.
The background:
It's simple, but effective, and it completes the feel of the piece. Only other i'll pick on is that you can still see some pencil lines on the clouds, and the hair.
But overall, you did a very nice piece. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to Tamster224 [2011-05-17 20:17:59 +0000 UTC]
thank you ; A ; <3333 that is so helpful!
yeah - i'll work on more clothing detail. thank you, * A *
some of the smaller details got "lost" in the inking/colouring process, but yes i agree overall i need more xD
and yeah, the pencil was left cuz i didn't have an eraser to erase it XD;;; it had broken halfway through, XD;;; orz
thank you so much <333 i agree with your critique - but i have noticed your star system is a little weird? ah, maybe i don't know XD ;; sorry lol.
thanks you're helpfullll
and yeah i don't usually give super unique poses for commishes/ats - since i don't wanna mess with the character's personality too much since it isn't my own xD
so yeah ; v ;
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Tamster224 In reply to xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx [2011-05-17 20:21:42 +0000 UTC]
No problemmm. ;u; <3
Eee, about the star system, ignore that, I haven't gotten the hang of it yet.
Fair enough! I personally try to tailor the pose accordingly to their personality. C:
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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to Tamster224 [2011-05-17 20:23:55 +0000 UTC]
no no it's ok!! it looks mostly ok - don't worry XD
that's a good idea.. i'll try to do more of that ; v ; make poses that fit them..
though this oc was quite literally shrouded in mystery xD i don't know his name, personality, etc..
but no yeah i'll try cool poses!! thank you muchly <3333
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TheArcaneArts [2011-05-22 08:35:32 +0000 UTC]
FDAHJKFDAHJK ARROWS!
/steals them
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TheRainbowDragon [2011-05-20 15:16:30 +0000 UTC]
8D <333333 I'm jelly of your art loll
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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to TheRainbowDragon [2011-05-20 17:58:20 +0000 UTC]
OH OH KDJHBFSJDH that makes me happy o // A // o thanks!
BUT NO I DON'T WANT YOU SAD ; A ; <33 unless you're not? XD
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NeoSoundBox [2011-05-19 01:34:55 +0000 UTC]
reminds me of the movie
....up
(SEE WHAT I DID THER?)
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NeoSoundBox In reply to xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx [2011-05-19 01:38:56 +0000 UTC]
so tis iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
but seriously this was a great piece <3
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Pikirii [2011-05-18 21:59:47 +0000 UTC]
Some people just look best in their entirity.
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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to Pikirii [2011-05-19 00:14:40 +0000 UTC]
i agree c: <3 like you mean they look better when you see all of them?
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SilentProXy [2011-05-18 18:24:17 +0000 UTC]
hes hot -drools-
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tomoe342 [2011-05-17 23:10:14 +0000 UTC]
wow.
this is one of the few art trade's you've done that I know what he's supposed to look like.
When above the influence got serious
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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to tomoe342 [2011-05-17 23:44:12 +0000 UTC]
OH LOL YES
the arrows
ABOVE THE INFLUENCE, TTLY. lol.
and yeah that is pretty neat you know who it issss
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tomoe342 In reply to xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx [2011-05-17 23:55:00 +0000 UTC]
Tomoe: I like yoii's OCs
Mizu: Do you know who else likes yoii's OCs?
My mom!!!
i thought that when i red the descrip
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hazardbaby [2011-05-17 22:18:38 +0000 UTC]
Nice use of blue lighting on his skin
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Sjcodan [2011-05-17 20:36:15 +0000 UTC]
nice!
(ps, look at my sig. should i make it bigger?)
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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to Sjcodan [2011-05-17 20:39:47 +0000 UTC]
thanks!
oh my gosh, your sig XD hahaha!
no, if it was bigger, it would dis-format comments on pages XD
if anything sliiightly smaller? ; A ; or not, if you don't want XD
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xXxMiZuMiXmIkOxXx In reply to Sjcodan [2011-05-17 23:45:22 +0000 UTC]
no i mean-
...
i don't want my pages on my picture's comments to be thrown off because of a sig.
like seriously, i like my pages to look NICE.
i'm sorry.
:c
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ArtChick94 [2011-05-17 20:09:32 +0000 UTC]
oohh hes hawt XDD
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