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Published: 2008-10-08 09:53:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 1507; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 42
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Description Emptiness grave in Mind
On a night I have invented
There is a strange big moon
But the stars elude the skies
And the clouds are of the sun

I don't know....

I don't know how how to take this death or relief known as Emptiness.

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I'm a big fan of `LuneBleu so I decided to use her stock photo of herself and this is what I came up with. I wanted to make a meaningful wonderful mysterious deviation for this very amazing artist! Ms. Anna Cruz, this deviation is dedicated to you.

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Also published in: poetry.xyldrae.com - [link]


Stocks Used from:

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Included in ~DeathLovers 's October 13, 2008 Collection [link]

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Also seen in the #DarkArtists-Inc club gallery.
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Comments: 31

Elchanan [2012-06-22 02:32:58 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work!

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CNGB [2012-06-10 04:52:12 +0000 UTC]

I really like this. Well done!

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xyldrae In reply to CNGB [2012-06-10 06:03:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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TonyGCampagna [2009-01-23 19:28:11 +0000 UTC]

A well done scenario.

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Morgry [2008-10-24 18:19:41 +0000 UTC]

Looks bwautiful...like a fairytale. Good Job!

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xyldrae In reply to Morgry [2008-10-24 18:32:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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caddman [2008-10-24 16:34:20 +0000 UTC]

...Wonderful work on this pic...very nice...

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xyldrae In reply to caddman [2008-10-24 17:20:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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DGruwier [2008-10-24 09:04:15 +0000 UTC]

Nice job, but it looks very fake, sorry . The lightning are all wrong.. like the gravestone is lighted from left and below, the lady from left and above, and the actual light source is the mooon behind them.. Next time try using stocks where the light comes from the same direction, and try adjusting the colors to fit each other. You should know that moonlight doesn't relfect colors like sunshine. Fx. it almost doens't reflect red at all, and that a problem with the ladys red dress and her face .

Good job anyway, like the composition.

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xyldrae In reply to DGruwier [2008-10-24 17:16:23 +0000 UTC]

hello. thank you for your detailed critique. This is not a form of "Realism" and it depicts the poem in my Artist Comments:

"Emptiness grave in Mind
On a night I have invented
There is a strange big moon
But the stars elude the skies
And the clouds are of the sun"

The moon is supposed to be fake and I show this by having clouds that only the sun can light in such a way depicted. It's "A night I have invented". As for the lighting, I agree with all your points, were this a Realistic theme. These distortions of realities are my graphic metaphors.

Nevertheless, I deeply appreciate your points and give you credit for being my most objective critic so far

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DGruwier In reply to xyldrae [2008-10-24 20:06:42 +0000 UTC]

ohooo the whole picture makes more sense now .

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silentfuneral [2008-10-18 17:28:22 +0000 UTC]

wow!! this is beautiful

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xyldrae In reply to silentfuneral [2008-10-19 15:45:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you It is currently what I'm most proud of in my gallery Hey your avatar's really beautiful!

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GoGoGodzirra [2008-10-14 02:49:53 +0000 UTC]

very nicely done

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xyldrae In reply to GoGoGodzirra [2008-10-14 14:21:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you once again

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jornas [2008-10-13 22:24:35 +0000 UTC]

nice photo manip, has a dark side of the moon/ wizard of oz feel to it.

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xyldrae In reply to jornas [2008-10-14 14:24:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much for the unique insights.

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SynapticBoomstick [2008-10-13 21:17:31 +0000 UTC]

I always like the feeling when a well done photo manipultion looks like a single seamless picture. Marvelous

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xyldrae In reply to SynapticBoomstick [2008-10-14 14:30:22 +0000 UTC]

me too! that's one of my major criteria and goal for photo manipulations and I'm very happy i'm able to achieve that in this piece. Thank you so much for the recognition, means so much to me.

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SynapticBoomstick In reply to xyldrae [2008-10-14 20:01:02 +0000 UTC]

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LuneBleu [2008-10-09 15:09:47 +0000 UTC]

It's so beautiful
thank you so much for the dedication

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xyldrae In reply to LuneBleu [2008-10-09 17:05:22 +0000 UTC]

Yehey!!! (**,) I'm so glad you like it. Belated Happy Birthday.

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JunebugHardee [2008-10-09 06:13:41 +0000 UTC]

great manipulation, very haunting

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xyldrae In reply to JunebugHardee [2008-10-09 08:44:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you. yes, i was aiming for that effect.

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chrizzz6 [2008-10-08 16:34:56 +0000 UTC]

nice. very nice

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xyldrae In reply to chrizzz6 [2008-10-08 16:43:08 +0000 UTC]

thanks! It's Lee's favorite!

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ElenaDudina [2008-10-08 10:16:51 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. Great work.

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xyldrae In reply to ElenaDudina [2008-10-08 14:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Glad you like it! nice avatar

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ElenaDudina In reply to xyldrae [2008-10-08 15:32:36 +0000 UTC]

YouΒ΄re welcome.

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Butch123 [2008-10-08 09:53:38 +0000 UTC]

Excellent job !

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xyldrae In reply to Butch123 [2008-10-08 10:06:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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