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OKami-hu [2010-07-17 22:36:09 +0000 UTC]
For being such a busty girl, she sure doesn't have any hips. Or a defined waist... The body should narrow at the waist - about at the level of the navel - not almost directly below the breasts (if there is a narrowing there, it's hard to see from the top...) Even women with short waists have SOME waist - unless they're of a more roundish figure.
Her head also looks a tad too large. The screen-right elbow should be located a bit lower.
The coloring and shading is very nice though.
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Raichana [2010-07-17 20:58:04 +0000 UTC]
Yay a hand! congrats! i'm proud of you
anyways my main critique has to do with the hand, remember that the middle finger should be the same lengths as the palm, the two fingers beside it are almost the same length as each other with the pointer being a little shorter while the pinkie is a whole knuckle shorter then the other fingers.
so in the images where the middle finger is short because it's bent behind other fingers and the pinky is really long it looks a little awkward.
and once again... define hips since it'll help character look less flat.
i can see the improvement... keep it up
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Yakkov In reply to Raichana [2010-07-17 21:02:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot :3
Just some of these pictures, like this one, were done before others. Like the Nariko one was done after this one. But the Missy one was done before this one.
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Yakkov In reply to Lobo-Illustrator [2010-07-06 22:17:19 +0000 UTC]
^__^
Thanks Angi. I guess staying up eighteen hours was worth it XD
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