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Published: 2010-08-19 17:48:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 4501; Favourites: 86; Downloads: 0
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Another Character of the Week submission (note this isn`t a DA contest)今週のキャラデザインコンテストに提出する作品です。今週のテーマは雪女でした。
This week`s theme was `Yuki Onna` (check wiki for details)
Due to some other projects I had to rush this a bit, and I don`t think it`s anywhere near as inovative or original as I would`ve wanted but meh... good practice.
もっとオリジナルで今まで無かった雪女コンセプトを作りたかったが、外のプロジェクトで忙しくてこの作品にかける時間はあまり無かったのです。
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Comments: 6
I wanted to give a crit. However if you were to ever work on it again.
The big glaring problem, I see is check the anatomy of the guy. His arms are fairly shorter than the female's arms. Actually, he looks like a midget! I don't really get a sense if Yuki is holding him up or if he's dead.
Image seems rather flat. I don't get a sense of a 3-d background. To push the trees back, lighten up the values. Because those tree seems to be on the same plane.
Also, this is me being picky. Your characters looks like a generic cookie cutter human. I think one thing that would of helped if you looked at a few ref pictures of what Asian people. Asian people's face have more of an angle and their face is more round and flat.
Men are more angler shaped. The guy has a facial feature of a female. Yuki has the facial feature of a male. Again more ref.
I can't tell if the guy is older. Or if he's in his teens.
Hopes it helps.
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thanks. definitely helps.
I`ll keep all that in mind in my future pieces.
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