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Published: 2019-12-06 13:00:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 401; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 0
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Description when those hungry ghosts
come and
emptiness gnaws

when the gray
clings
and climbs
inside

and the mirror
whispers
silence

when surrender
sings its
tenebrous
siren
song

you have someone

.

when indecision's ice
melts
under warm
and better
skies

when color returns

in sunsets and
streaks
of blue

when you taste
honey-balm and
whiskey warmth

there
on your tongue

you have someone
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Comments: 12

nosedivve [2020-01-08 22:56:42 +0000 UTC]

I think rupi kaur and her cronies wish they could write like this. Your poetry is always musically-inclined, but also bent on simplicity (in the best way) and imagery. It’s a good concoction.Β 

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YouInventedMe In reply to nosedivve [2020-01-11 18:40:08 +0000 UTC]

This is a wonderfully kind comment. Thank you very much.

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nosedivve In reply to YouInventedMe [2020-01-11 19:01:36 +0000 UTC]

Of course!

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ilyilaice [2019-12-06 20:22:18 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, I recognize quite a few of these phrases. I loved that poem, and this one too!

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YouInventedMe In reply to ilyilaice [2019-12-08 06:04:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Joesmo25 [2019-12-06 18:52:16 +0000 UTC]

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YouInventedMe In reply to Joesmo25 [2019-12-08 06:05:04 +0000 UTC]

Much obliged, my friend. Good to see you around so much lately.

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Joesmo25 In reply to YouInventedMe [2019-12-10 18:09:34 +0000 UTC]

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rsage [2019-12-06 18:05:39 +0000 UTC]

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YouInventedMe In reply to rsage [2019-12-08 06:05:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

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LiterarySerenity [2019-12-06 14:40:42 +0000 UTC]

Always.Β 

Lovely!

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YouInventedMe In reply to LiterarySerenity [2019-12-06 18:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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