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Published: 2019-04-26 19:34:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 749; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 0
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live your truthmagpie
spread your wings
I know I am no
bright
and shiny thing
no piece
worth collecting
likewise I
do not begrudge you
the
sky
content here
in your
shadow
the sun is
yours
for the taking
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This one stands out to me. So direct! It's great!
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Reminds me of a French song by Florent Pagny:Β www.youtube.com/watch?v=g-gh2hβ¦
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That link is blocked in the US, but I found one on youtube with
English subs. I can see the resemblance, particularly in the chorus.
Thank you for sharing it. <3
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Echoing what everyone else knows and has expressed, you are the shiniest.
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βΊοΈ Thank you. This really isnβt meant to be a poem about me or any perceived shortcomings, but you are all so very kind.
Thanks again. <3
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Heh, you take to the skies in your own unique ways--especially through your pretty poetry.
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Thank you. <3
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Thanks very much.
I hope this poem isn't coming across as despondent
or self-deprecating, because it's not meant to be that at all.
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Giving (and feeling) without expectations is one of the purest things you can do in life. But the sun is also yours for the taking too
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Thank you very much. <3
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Oh wow. I wish you the sky and the thrill of flying with a bird of your feather by your side.
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Thank you.
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PermanentlyExhausted beat me to it. SHANE. You were the brightest fucking shining thing at the end of a year of darkness. You are, still. Consider yourself collected.Β Β
#teamnewuniverse Β
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Another one to save forever in the folder.
I've already told you how much this (and you) are appreciated,
but please repeat it to yourself about a trillion more times.
Thank you.
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you're most definitely a bright & shiny "thing" to someone out there
meant in the best way possible
as always
<3
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Thank you so much.
As always <3
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perhaps it's best to give and feel without expectations
somewhere i heard once that "unmet expectations is what ends most relationships" or something like that
maybe it's best this way
also
(this is ever unchanging)
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Oh, Iβd say itβs definitely best, at least for me.
And thank you so much. <3
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Thank you. Thatβs a very nice compliment.
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